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Bedtime, 1939
by Randall Davis Barfield
Thursday, March 29, 2007

Rated "G" by the Author.

       
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     Not another Elvis! This story developed due to a blog I wrote a short time ago on March 15. I'm not so sure it's 'literary fiction'. Any suggestions?

“Bedtime baby, time to go to bed,” she said from the kitchen sink.

 

“I don’t want to go to bed ma. I’m not sleepy,” the four-year-old boy said.

 

“That’s okay, but you still have to. Got to get your sleep.”

 

“Please ma?”

 

“Nope. There are your pajamas on the bed. All ready for you to jump into.”

 

The lad goes over and begins to change into his pajamas.

 

“I’ll be there shortly for your prayers,” his mom said.

 

“Okay, now let’s kneel down.” Both kneeled.

 

“Repeat after me: Now I lay me…”

 

“Now I lay me…” the little boy repeated obediently to the end of the prayer.

 

“Good, that’s my little hero,” she told him. “God bless mama.”

 

“God bless mama.”

 

“God bless daddy.”

 

“God bless daddy.”

 

“I love you Jesus.”

.

“I love you Jesus.”

 

“And I always will.”

 

“And I always will.”

 

“Forever and ever.”

 

“Forever and ever.”

 

“Now go to sleep, honey. Mama loves you.”

 

“Can you read me a story?” the boy asked.

 

“Not tonight, your daddy’s waiting. I will tomorrow night. I promise. I’ll read you a story about Moses. You want to learn about Moses?”

 

“Yes,” the boy answered.

 

“That’s my little fella. You’re a handsome boy. One day you’re gonna be a handsome and famous man. Make a lot of money. But you’ll never forget Jesus and helping others. Promise me that. You gonna do that for your mama?

 

“I promise mama,” he said.

 

“Promise what Elvis?” she asked.

 

“Never to forget Jesus.”

 

“That’s my hero. Okay, you get a nice kiss. Oh, Elvis, how mama loves you!”

 
 
 
 
 
 

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Reviewed by Linda Newton Perry 9/19/2008
Nice twist. Loved Elvis!
Reviewed by Chrissy McVay 4/8/2007
Very cute.

Chrissy
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling 3/31/2007
I have often watched Elvis documentaries and his biography, while also reading about his life, in everything that I have ever read and watched about him, he acknowledged the Lord, and loved to sing the old hymns of zion. No one really knows how his heart was when he passed, but wouldn't it be amazing to get to heaven and see the Jesus the King of Kings then stroll down the streets of gold to see the Elvis the other King...just a silly thought I guess but I too loved Elvis...such a loss, and we really don't know, only he and the Lord knew his heart when he passed away. Great write my friend, enjoyed this much.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Reviewed by Brett Moore 3/30/2007
Interesting story. From what I know of Elvis's life, he was really attached to his mother, too. Did Elvis forget Jesus? It certainly seems there was some despair in the end. I don't know if that's the statement you were making, but you certainly have me wondering.

Brett
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor 3/29/2007
So THAT is where all the gospel music came from!
See how programmed?

ROFL

Reviewed by Dennis Leischner 3/29/2007
Randall

Elvis?? Got me laughing on that, nice touch.
One additional comment. In the opening line "she said from the kitchen sink" I had to wonder if momma was sitting in the sink or taking a bath or what.
Fun read.

Dennis
Reviewed by Stan Grimes 3/29/2007
Pleasant and interesting surprise. Nice one.

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