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Do Us Part
by Sandra A. Mushi
Monday, June 25, 2007

Rated "PG13" by the Author.

       
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Reviewed by S Cardin 7/1/2007
Sandie, the ending was sad! I felt so bad for our herione. You did a good job tapping into emotion with the story. If anything, I might suggest a light copyedit. For example, the word "him" is missing in the following: "I met at church." You did a good job with the short story format.

Keep writing!
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 6/26/2007
Excellent write, Sandie; very well penned! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 6/25/2007
Oh dear! I was not expecting that ending. Nicely done, Sandra. Best wishes to you with love and peace,

Regis

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