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stacked...
by John W Leko
Saturday, September 1, 2007

Rated "PG" by the Author.

       
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     sometimes...things are not all they are stacked up to be.

            The chesty waitress with a half smile…pointed hanky in her pocket over heart…and pencil over her hoop adorned ear…stacked the orders on the wheel…on the counter near the pick up window…where the warmer dishes were stacked.  The menus were stacked…near the register…where the already processed tickets…were stacked on a spindle.
            
The coffee service and cups…were stacked on a separate table…next to the extra chairs…neatly stacked…near the door…where the customers were stacked…one behind the other…for the lunch rush.  Some were just finishing their short stacks…while the chesty waitress removed syrups from the tables…and replaced them with catsup…mustard…and mayonnaise jars…stacked in a convenient metal trine stand.
           
By this time…the orders were being put in the window…to be picked up…and as the orders stacked up…the smoke from the grill clouded the kitchen…and rose up under the stainless hood...up through the stack…and out into the city…where all the living quarters were…stacked tightly…one against the other.
           
It was the usual busy day…and when lunch was over…the tables were cleaned…the menus were wiped off…and stacked again next to the register.  All dishes…cups and saucers…had been washed…and again stacked in their familiar settings…for the next mornings breakfast…just breakfast and lunch…no dinners.
           
The chesty waitress counted and stacked her coins on the counter…she bundled and stacked her one dollar bills on the counter…she stacked her tickets from the days work on the spindle… and stashed her tips in her apron pocket.  She took her stacked hair…her bag…and made her chesty way home to her stacked living quarters.  Another day had gone by…when she did not blow her stack.


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Reviewed by Terry Rizzuti 7/27/2008
Good job, John. If I was playing cards with you instead of reading your story, I'd call it a stacked deck. Terry
Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath 6/7/2008

Quite interesting John the way you "Stacked" each word upon the other. Take the best of care, have a wonderful day.

Sincerely,
~Gwendolyn

Reviewed by Mary Patterson 5/17/2008
Lite, filled with some humor. Every thing was stacked!........M
Reviewed by Bernice Angoh 3/25/2008
hahahaha, that word is now "stacked" in my head, lol.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 3/4/2008
There is a lot of "stacked" meaning in this account, John. Cleverly created. Thanks for sharing. Love and peace to you,

Regis
Reviewed by David Thompson 2/23/2008
I loved the way you stacked and compacted this story and made me see everything that was taking place...like it was some kind of well-oiled machine.

David
Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks 2/21/2008
I think the odds were stacked against us to unstack this stack of knowledge. You've stacked your words nicely, friend!

Micke
(who just couldn't help herself from stacking the stacks...[groan] :o)
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 9/2/2007
Oh! you naughty naughty boy! stacked she was?!!!
A great little story here.
Georg
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone 9/1/2007
well done and well pictured. Lady J
Reviewed by George Carroll 9/1/2007
This stacks up to be a pretty good story about a waitress who is stacked.

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