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| Reviewed by Carvin Wallson |
7/20/2009 |
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| I'm of a younger generation, but also have a vivid memory of my first RC car. While others had those that would zoom yards ahead of them, I walked only a few inches behind mine. I loved my childhood, but toys were never what money was spent on--they were distractions from schoolwork and learning. I grew up being probably the only person in my graduating class to have never cleared the original Mario Brothers. Now that I see those who spent hours on end in front of a TV screen making twice as much as I do, I wonder if my mother's wishes were in the best place. No matter, though, as I am and will always be secure in my knowledge that my days spent buried in Encyclopedia Brown books were well-spent. |
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| Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath |
5/14/2008 |
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John this was a most special story thoroughly enjoyable, I appreciate reading this. Knowing this memory is very close to your heart and it was a magnificent sharing although a shadow of sadness in the conclusion.
Sending prayers and blessings to you John,
~Gwendolyn
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| Reviewed by C. Edgar Nolan |
5/8/2008 |
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Memories of youth... gifts, tears, taxis
Nice write. |
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| Reviewed by Bernice Angoh |
3/25/2008 |
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| Bitter-sweet memories of a yellow taxicab that meant the world to a young boy. Very touching story...your father did a great thing that day, he left you a gift that will last forever in your memory. |
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| Reviewed by Charlie |
3/23/2008 |
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| Great juxtaposing parallelism at the end. I too remember times when my father went out of his way for (just) me... things like that are pretty ...well... sacred. This is an important write-- one to pass on down the generations in a biography of your own. --Charlie |
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| Reviewed by Leann Marshall |
3/11/2008 |
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John,
These memories are so dear, and I can see the little yellow taxi in my head. Toys were simpler then, but we got so much pleasure out of them, didn't we? All of it, good and bad, are a part of us, to be sure. Thanks for sharing your memories. |
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| Reviewed by Michael Guy |
3/9/2008 |
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touching twist to end your story of another yellow taxi... and in your usual or unusual "ampersand style"... I too had a lower, middle class upbringing in a small 1950's salt box cape-cod style house. Most of gift were almost always bought by Mom also. But once my Dad (an ex WW2 fighter pilot) bought me my first gas powered model plane and we flew it togetherin a vacant lot. I remember it fondly as well.
Great family, nostaglia human-interest story. Good for the aging boomers to read! |
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| Reviewed by Cleve Sylcox |
3/8/2008 |
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| Your discriptions and remembrences brought tears to my eyes...nice job! |
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| Reviewed by Katie Gabrielle |
2/29/2008 |
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This story brought tears to my eyes...it is so touching. It means
so much to have a family together at dinner time. It may seem such
a little thing, but it makes a memory--an impression on a young
boy. I am glad your Dad gave you the taxi...especially a powered
one with a remote control. I can remember my very first walking doll--my aunt gave it to me...I loved her for that! I never had any toy
with power either...I never forgot that toy or her for that...
anyway, the last part of your story really got to me...and how
ironic to be put in the same kind of taxi to be spared a domestic
quarrel. Yes, they say whatever doesn't kill you makes you stronger,
but try explaining that to a kid who only wants his family to stay
together...yeah right... Bless you and your write wonderfully!
Thanks so much for sharing your story
katie :) |
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| Reviewed by Anita Sie |
2/27/2008 |
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Childhood memories... when they are nice... they are really nice!
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| Reviewed by David Thompson |
2/23/2008 |
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John,
Your writing style is very interesting and easy to follow. I could connect with this story quite well. I, too, have one vivid birthday from my childhood. There was only one cake that I recall...one of coconut...in the shape of a lamb. I was so enthralled with the cake that I wouldn't let anyone cut it. As a result, it eventually dried up to the point that no one could eat it. Gee, that was a long time ago...probably in the late 1940s...but the memory is vivid...as if it were only yesterday.
David |
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| Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks |
2/21/2008 |
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Oh, that only the first remembrance of Yellow Taxi could be sustained in your thoughts. But the most powerful seems to be the wonderful gift! That's good...
Micke |
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| Reviewed by Mary Patterson |
2/21/2008 |
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| A nice story about a special moment in your childhood. Those were the days to grow up!.. It seems lif was easier , traditions more valued. Thanks for sharing....M |
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| Reviewed by Jayne Waggoner |
2/20/2008 |
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| nicely done and a grand story. I only remember getting a stuff poodle dog one time. Nagged my parents into it. Great job John. |
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| Reviewed by Olita Williams |
2/19/2008 |
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| This is so emotive. Takes me back as well to sitting around a family table and having meals together, There was mum and Dad and 8 children. Well done John and excellent piece! |
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| Reviewed by Theresa Koch |
1/29/2008 |
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| My this was wonderful~`* |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
8/23/2007 |
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A most engaging story, John. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
8/23/2007 |
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A great short story, with humanity and that innocent naïveté of a little boy looking at the box in the hands of his father.
After, life shocked him into the real world, where Easter bunny never went prancing on the lawn.
Excellent!
Georg |
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| Reviewed by Nancy Meeks |
8/22/2007 |
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Hi John,
This is absolutely GREAT!!! As usual, I was glued to what I was reading anxiously waiting for the next line! I love the way you describe the details of the car, the D cell batteries and wires, also the layout of the home and what your dining room furniture looked like (retro LOL) which are so important for the younger readers born in the 60's and so forth. Your story allows people to CONNECT with you and that you are REAL and not just an elusive author on a web site. By the way there were a time or two that my Mother also packed that "same" suitcase due to an argument...I remember it well.
Nancy Meeks |
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