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The Breakfast Nook
by Randall Davis Barfield
Wednesday, December 5, 2007

Rated "G" by the Author.

       
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“Get up, Son,” his mother said as she looked into the alcove where he customarily slept. “Your breakfast is ready.”

 

“Can’t,” he said. “Can’t move.”

 

“Yes you can. Your food will get cold. Do you want another cold breakfast?”

 

“Is that Dad I hear?” he asked, rising and reaching for his clothes.

 

“That’s him. He’s out back working already. He’ll be needing you soon, don’t you think?”

 

“I need a day off. Dad’s work is too hard.”

 

“Day off, my love? What about me? What’s this in my hand?” she asked. "Marigolds?" 

 

He smiled, entering the breakfast nook.

 

“It’s a broom, Mom. That’s all. An old broom,” he said.

 

“That’s all! There, you see? When do I get a day off? Not even on the Sabbath. We have to eat that day too, do we not?”

 

“We all three need a day off then,” he said. “Soon. Let’s choose one.”

 

“Eat up, my boy!” said Mary, his young mom. “Your food’s getting cold. One day you’ll be old and forgotten. Won’t have your poor mom or dad here to beg and prod you, let alone make you a hot breakfast!”

 

Looking straight into his mom’s eyes with that special love very few are capable of, the boy Jesus began eating his porridge and spoke.

 

“I can assure you, Mom--both you and dad-- that I’ll never be old and I’ll never be forgotten!” 

 

A speechless Mary stared at her only son. She’d seen him this way before. Mysterious. As if he could see into the future or something.

 
 
 
 

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Reviewed by Joyce Bowling 1/4/2008
Well done, how'de I miss this one...Don't know but glad I found it...hope the New Year is great thus far and brings you much joy, peace, laughter, good health, and prosperity....blessings from Ky.
Joyce B.
Reviewed by Joyce Devenish 12/28/2007
Good one, well done...Joyce
Reviewed by Sandra Mushi 12/28/2007
Randall, this brought a smile on my face. Amen! Poignant write.

Merry Christmas and God bless,

Sandie.
Reviewed by Birdie Jaworski 12/10/2007
Randall, hello! I'm new to AD, and somehow found myself at your archive. This is a powerful and poignant piece. Which one of us can't relate to an unruly teenager, one with eyes of steel and the knowledge that He Knows What Is? All teenagers have the heart of Jesus, I think. It's good to be reminded of this. What a fun read. I enjoyed it.
Reviewed by Brett Moore 12/6/2007
Really poignant. You portray Jesus like any other little boy at the beginning of the story.

Brett
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 12/6/2007
You gotcha me with this one!!!!
Very nice done.
Georg
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 12/5/2007
this is touching
Reviewed by Felix Perry 12/5/2007
I love the way you actually make Jesus be the everyday man he was even as a boy...like most teenagers slighty lazy and a little rebellious. Enjoyed.

fee
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 12/5/2007
Very good story, Randall; very well penned! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Walt Hardester 12/5/2007
Nice.

Walt
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 12/5/2007
You took me into the Breakfast Nook, Randall, and I am grateful to have read this heartwarming story.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

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