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The Pit
by William Butler
Monday, July 7, 2008

Rated "PG" by the Author.

       
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     This may well be the sickest, most tasteless thing I've every written. But before you condemn me, let me tell you how it came to be.

One Saturday morning I was in a particularly silly mood. When I went to wake my wife, rather than simply nudging her, I leaned over and whispered in her ear, "There are voices calling up from the pit. I think I shall throw pieces of meat in to pacify them." And so the spark that became this short story was born. Needless to say, my wife's only response was, "You're one sick puppy.", to which I was unable to disagree.

I finished the story in one sitting. To be certain, it is very short; fewer than 500 words. Soon thereafter, just for the heck of it, I entered "The Pit" in a short story contest. To my surprise it won first place.

I'll let any who chance to read it judge for themselves. As I said, it was written on a whim because of a bit of silliness that gripped me at the time.

THE PIT
by William Butler

      Martin drove into the garage and let the engine run. Lightning flashed, briefly illuminating the darkness as thunder rumbled in the distance.
     "You know what's next, don't you?"
     His voice was cold and hard.
     Jenny sat huddled against the passenger door. Makeup left dark trails as it trickled down her cheeks from red, puffy eyes. She shivered from fear rather than her cold, wet clothes.
     "I won't do it again, Martin." Her voice quivered. "Really I won't"
     When Martin didn't respond, she pled again.
     "Please don't put me back. Oh dear God please, Martin. Please."
     Martin switched off the engine and stepped from the car. Jenny stayed hunched against her door eyeing him in the service porch doorway. Finally, she got out and eased past him.
     He followed through the kitchen and into the main hall where they stopped at a recess leading to the basement stairs. Martin reached around her and opened the door.
     Light shown from below, casting odd shadows. Jenny stared down into the semi-darkness, shook her head and began to inch away.
     "No," she begged. "Please, Martin."
     "I'm sorry but it didn't work."
     Before she could offer further protest, he lunged forward and grabbed her arms. Lifting her bodily from the floor, he carried her kicking and screaming down the stairs. At the bottom, he flung her sprawling to the floor. Through tears, her eyes found the pit.
     It spanned twenty feet from edge to edge, and fell away into a tangible darkness. Faint voices rose up from below. Disordered and excited, they called Martin's name.
     "You see." He smiled. "You have to go back so I can bring one of them out; give one of them a chance."
     The voices grew louder.
     "I won't do it again." Jenny slid away from him and nearer the gapping hole. "I swear, Martin, I won't."
     Slowly, he moved closer and knelt beside her.
     "I let you out, cleaned you up and clothed you. I tried to show how much I loved you; cared for you."
     With one hand he stroked her hair while the other gripped tightly around her arm.
     "But you ran away in less than a week. And I told you..."
     Before he could finish, a hand reached over the pit's edge and clamped around his ankle. Two more appeared, then a fourth. He tried to stand but they clawed and pulled, and he toppled over onto his hands and knees.
     He turned to Jenny, eyes pleading, his mouth open in horror.
     "No!"
     "Yes," Jenny shouted as she scrambled to her feet and threw herself at him, "let's go into the pit!"
     Martin screamed.
 
THE END
 
© Copyright 1994 by William Butler

 

 

 

 

 

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