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Cancellation
by Randall Davis Barfield
Thursday, July 24, 2008

Rated "G" by the Author.

       
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“What’s this $80? I don’t remember your mentioning it,” Mack Jordan asked his housekeeper, Aretha Flournoy.
 
“Of course I mentioned it,” Aretha replied. “I mentioned it Friday a week ago. You paid Jack for two lawn jobs.”
 
“What Jack?” Mack asked.
 
“Jack Pate,” said Aretha.
 
“The crippled teenager?”
 
“No matter. He always does a great job on the grass,” Aretha said.
 
It was a weekly ritual for both: going over the accounts item-by-item, savings and checking. Mack Jordan, an unwilling widower a few short years ago, was a retired pro golfer. He’d enjoyed national fame and earnings and had played alongside such contemporaries as Palmer and Nicklaus. He was pleased Aretha had been with him going on 20 years now. Her value to his well-being was unquestionable.
 
“I’ll get that,” Aretha said and answered the phone on Mack’s oversized yew studio desk. After a couple of minutes, she hung up.
 
“Cancellation and bad news,” she said. “Dr. Harper.”
 
“Cancellation?” Mack cried. “They just called early this morning saying not to forget!”
 
“I know that, but Melba just now said Dr. Harper passed about an hour after this morning’s call.”
 
Mack winced.
 
“Sure was sudden. He was only in his fifties, wasn’t he? Overworked, I suppose. Oh, I don’t mean to sound cold, but after you lose a spouse, nothing shocks you anymore,” he said. “You know that, Aretha.”
 
“Can’t argue there,” Aretha said. She’d lost two husbands due to death. She wasn’t interested in a third.
 
“Now who’ll supervise my stress test tomorrow morning?” he asked.
 
“You won’t be having it tomorrow. You’ll have to wait a few days. They’ll call us. Melba said Dr. Logan will be there to assist you. He’s an excellent cardiologist and has been with the company over five years.”
 
“All their cardiologists are excellent. They don’t hesitate to remind anyone. Maybe I’ll last a few more days,” Mack said sardonically.
 
“I’m sure you will Mr. Jordan,” Aretha smiled.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce 8/24/2008
Sounds like he'll live on. Heeeheee!!! Your stories are very entertaining.

Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Lois Christensen 7/25/2008
Great, and I think he'll live to see the other Dr. Good luck to him and for having the patience to wait for another visit to come up with his doctor. Life does get in your way sometime and changes things at the last moment. Hang in there.
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 7/25/2008
enjoyed the flow of this story
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 7/25/2008
Thank you for sharing Randall, hope he can find it to trust another doctor to see him through.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 7/25/2008
Great story, Randall; very well written! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

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