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     Growing Up On the Phone ...

NOTE TO READERS: PLEASE READ MY POEM 'FOR ZAC' BEFORE READING THIS PIECE. OK? THANK YOU!

"That was a very nice poem dad, I liked it very much."

"Well thank you very much, sonny boy. I spent several hours on it."

"But it doesn't rhyme."

"It needn't, Zac.  Poetry doesn't have to rhyme to be poetry. It can be

"free form"-seemingly random thoughts but which actually tell a story

poetically. Got it?"

"Well ..'

"It's in the language, son.  A good story teller draws his reader into his

story by relating common experiences in such a way that the reader

ends up saying, "Hey yea, that happened to me. I can relate."

"Ok, I've got that, but ..."

"But what son, what's on your mind?"

"I dunno. I guess what you wrote and I read is really our story, isn't it?

It's like the whole world gets to peak into our lives, our relationship."

"Now you've got it. You're thinking son. You're figuring it out. What you

are understanding perhaps for the first time on a meaningfully mature

level is life itself."

"Yea, okay ... yea, " his voice trailed off.

"Zac, you know how parents often "threaten" their kids that they'll do the

same stuff as their paremts someday after they've married and have

kids? You've heard me and mom say that before, right?

"Sure, but I didn't believe it till now."

"Go on," I encouraged him to tell me more. It was getting real

interesting.

"Well, you know the whole flowers thing?"

"Yes, ... what about it?" I asked.

"I'll  have kids one day ... "

"Please God," I uttered softly, "and I"ll likely have flowers along my

driveway like we had for so long."

"Zac, what do you mean "had"? They're still there son, perennials, you

know. They return every year."

"Right,  right ... anyway ..."

"Go on ... "

"Well,  I can easily imagine my son doing what I did,  remember?"

"Yes son,  I do."  Zac was referring to how one afternoon years

before he had plucked the orange lilies from their stems. When I saw

what he had done, I scolded him pretty severely. It was coming together

for him. I was taking lots of pleasure in this conversation because my

younger son was nearing the completion of the puzzle.

 "When my son plucks the flowers, I can't imagine me saying anything

else but what you told me. Remember?"

 "Yup it's in the poem."

 "Right. Respect life son, its beauty."

 I was kvelling on my end of the phone, about ready to burst with joy!

"So life continues from me to you, son."

 I got it.

 "You got it?"

 " I got it."

 "Talk tomorrow?"

"Yea dad."

 "Be safe."

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Reviewed by Micki Peluso 8/14/2008
Alan, that was a wonderful poem, expressing life from one generation to another in the form of general conversation. Beautifully done!! So mant times, we have talks with our children and they don't seem to "get it". What a nice example of one that did get it.

Best regards always,

Micki Peluso, author of . . .AND THE WHIPPOORWILL SANG
Reviewed by Erin Collins 8/14/2008
What a poignant snipet of life as a parent, raising a child, then witnessing that child 'get it'.
I enjoyed this piece very much.
I think you're a wonderful story teller.
Keep writing! Hope to read more of your prose soon!

Warmest regards,
Erin Collins,
Author of Shadow Walk: The Gathering

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