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Climbing Boy 4: Into Black
by Mark M Lichterman
Saturday, July 25, 2009

Rated "G" by the Author.

       
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     Climbing upward till his head and shoulders rose above
the crown of the chimney, feeling the winds full force,
“Christ!” Leaning into it, Johnson peered into the black hole.
Hearing the expletive, Zachariah looked up.

 

 

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Thick plumes of dense smoke roiling upward further

blackening their exposed skin, the three working chimneys

rained particles of black soot mixed with sleet and rain upon

the boy and man. Hunching their bodies forward into the

wind, they made their way to the fourth—currently

inoperable—chimney that, as the other three ran from the

floor of the factory, three stories below, to the roof, and

twenty feet higher.

 

Huddling as best they could out of the weather alongside

the leeward side of the chimney, “Com’er, boy. Let’s make

ya ready.”

______________________________________________________

 

Climbing Boy 4: Black

December 24, 1843

London, England

 

Unslinging the rope, the boy let it drop to the deck.

Taking one end of the rope, Johnson fashioned double

loops.

 

Zachariah slipped one leg through each loop. Johnson

pulled upward, then slackened so the rope didn’t cut into

the boy’s groin. He then ran the rope up Zachariah’s back,

to just beneath his arms and made another, larger loop that

the boy slipped over his head and arms so that the rope now

formed a harness that held Zachariah by each thigh, around

his chest, and under his arms.

 

Opening the toolbox, Johnson removed a rope belt

holding a scraping tool and a hard bristled brush by means

of twine loops attached to both tools. Tying the belt around

the boy’s waist, “Ya looks fit ‘n’ ready.”

 

Pretending encouragement to cover his own fear, “Let’s

make for it!” the man said, slapping the boy on the rump.

Standing directly beneath the imposing chimney, looking

upward, squinting against the rain, sleet and falling soot,

the structure looking far taller than its twenty visible feet,

Zachariah gloomily nodded his head and, reaching upward,

took hold of the first iron rung, then—the boy first, the man

following—both began to climb.

 

Hand over hand.

 

One small, filthy, chafed fist closing around one wet, cold,

rusted rung… one after another.

 

Hand over hand.

 

Higher. Higher.

 

A strong gust of wind…

 

Never admitting to having a God. Never calling on his

God except when His name was used as an expletive, or,

most usually, when in terror, “Christ! Oh, Christ!” hanging

on tightly, the man screwed his eyes shut as…

 

Never in a church. Other than an occasional quick,

“Godly” lecture by a well-meaning household servant, not

aware that one as lowly as himself could have a God, but

wishing he had a God, “Oh, Lordy, Lordy!” His eyes wide

open, the boy hung on tightly as…

 

…The structure swayed.

 

Their arms held through the steel rungs directly opposite

their faces, they hung on by their crooked elbows till…

Till finally, after an hour that lasted no more than seven

seconds, the wind abated, and…

 

The fear no more on this day than on the two previous

days when they’d begun this job, breathing deeply, blinking

a number of times to bring moisture back onto his eyes, his

blood appearing redder than normal against the black of

his skin, three knuckles on one hand and two from the other

bleeding from where they’d scraped on rungs, I must! Hating

having to, his mind repeating, I must, I must, I must!

Zachariah started up again.

 

A few rungs lower, feeling a cough building in his chest,

Johnson closed his eyes and concentrated on, Don’t cough!

Don’t cough! Turning his head he looked down and, seeing

the barely noticeable but definite careening motion of the

chimney, quickly closed his eyes again and, if at all possible,

tightened his arms even tighter. Hugging the rung even

closer, he brought his face back to the level of the bricks

directly before him. If at any time he felt pity for the boy it

was now, because of all the things he hated, Johnson hated

this the most: the height, the wind, the cold! He looked up;

the boy was almost to the top. Swallowing his fear, along

with the urge to cough, putting his foot onto the next rung,

hesitating, letting go, loosening and lifting one arm, Johnson

began to climb again.

 

He was there. Zachariah had reached the top, and now—

of all the dreadful things in the boy’s formidable existence—

what he had to do next was the most frightful.

 

A step beneath the boy, locking one arm around the rung,

Johnson grabbed hold of the dangling rope that hung from

the boy’s back and, using one hand, bringing a few feet of it

through two rungs, said, “Zach, boy,” his teeth clicking with

cold, with fear, “get on with ya. Ya knows I can’t tie ya down

till you’re onto it!”

 

Up this high, the winds blew stronger and almost

constantly.

 

Waiting a moment, Please! Praying to his unknown God,

Please! Another moment, waiting, hoping the wind would

slacken, but…

 

“Zachariah, do it!”

 

The wind did not slacken, and slowly, I must! slowly, his

heart thumping, Please! ever so slowly, I must! Lifting one

foot off the rung, the other foot, hesitantly, slowly following

the first, Please! I must! he climbed the last few rungs… till

his head and shoulders rose above the crown of the chimney.

His heart thumping so hard the boy thought it might leave

his chest, his head and shoulders above the crown of the

chimney, Lordy, above the minimal protection the brick

structure allowed, I must, the boy was buffeted by more

wind, by more rain, by more sleet. His teeth clacking with

cold, in fear, his chest and hips rose slowly above the circular

structure, and now, rocked by the wind, fearfully, using all

the willpower he possessed, the fingers of his left hand

opened slowly as he released the top rung. Quickly now,

stretching his body and reaching across the width of the

flue, Zachariah grasped the support rung on the opposite

side and, his bleeding knuckles turning white with the strain

of holding on, Lordy! Lordy, pulling the rest of his body

upward, he lay face down across the hollow, black hole of

the chimney.

 

The back of his long-coat ballooning upward and the tail

of his scarf blowing backward, the cold wind forcing tears

from the slits of his eyes, sleet slicing his face, the boy hung

on for his life.

 

A few feet below, hanging on for his life also, one elbow

locked through a rung, playing out just enough rope to allow

for the boy’s movement, “Lad… Lad, careful, boy.” Speaking

quietly, more to himself than to the boy, whispering, as

though were he to speak aloud it might upset his and

Zachariah’s precarious positions.

 

The wind worse now, the fear even greater than on the

two previous days, carefully, “Lordy,” the boy’s one-word

prayer being sucked from his lips, turning his body, “Lordy,”

pulling himself up, sitting up, lifting his legs, he put them

into the flue. “Lordy!” fully exposed now, just barely able to

hold onto the lip of the chimney with one hand and the

support rung with the other…

 

The wind gusts. The tall, cylindrical structure swayed

and the boy wanted to close his eyes, but was afraid.

Another gust almost blowing him over, his throat dry,

unable to speak, bending to the side he looked down

at Johnson.

 

“Good lad!” Testing the rope once again, making sure it

was woven through and firmly wound around two rungs,

“Aye, boy,” he said. “Do it!”

 

Quickly now, wanting to be through with it, releasing

the support rung, sliding off the chimney’s edge, dropping

into the black hole he fell four feet till, biting into his groin,

grabbing at his shoulders, the slack playing out of the rope

tightened around the boy’s body and the sudden halting of

his fall swung him to the side where he hit the wall with

enough force to cause the breath to push from his lungs,

leaving Zachariah to hang near sixty feet above the ground.

 

Climbing upward till his head and shoulders rose above

the crown of the chimney, feeling the winds full force,

“Christ!” Leaning into it, Johnson peered into the black hole.

Hearing the expletive, Zachariah looked up.

 

The top of his head four feet from daylight, such as it

was, his clothing and the skin of his face melding with the

cylindrical black wall, Zachariah’s eyes were the only bright

spots within sight. Shouting to be heard above the wind,

Johnson said, “Ya set, boy?”

 

“Aye,” spoken with minimal enthusiasm and conviction.

 

Flexing his fingers a number of times, trying to regain

the circulation in his cramped hand, “Aye,” Johnson repeated

as, leaning across the flue, he took a hitch around the support

rung, then, stepping down two rungs, he released the hitch

on the rope from the lower rung and, making a large loop,

ran it beneath the rung and upward forming a kind of pulley.

Reaching behind his back he took a small lantern that had

been hanging from his belt, then, stepping up again, leaning

into the flue, hanging from his mid-section, he clipped the

lantern to the rope about a foot above the boy’s head.

Leaning a bit further into the chimney, shielding it from the

wind as best he could, striking a match, putting it in the

lantern the wick sputtered, burned a moment, and

then ignited.

 

Rotating in a tight circle, the lantern light cast circling

shadows of the boy’s body.

 

Out of the wind-driven sleet and rain, in the comparative

warmth of this closely confined place, a feeling of comfort

came to the boy, but he’d been here twice before and knew

that this sense of comfort was temporary as…

 

“‘ere we go!”

 

Tilting his head upward, still leaning into the chimney,

he looked at the silhouetted half-figure of Johnson and,

knowing where he was going, “Aye.” The boy looked

downward as…

 

Inch by inch he is lowered into the narrow, black depth.

Looking upward, the light from the sky above becoming

smaller as…

 

Foot by foot he is lowered until the light above is but a

pinpoint, as below…

 

The blackness becomes larger…

 

Larger, until below is all there is, and…

 

The deeper the boy is lowered, the more frightened he

becomes, as rotating, What if…

 

Rotating in half turns, his swaying, slowly turning body

casting eerie shadows upon the round wall of this closely

confined, ever-revolving tomb. And, What if, thinking…

 

The boy’s brain told him he was safe, But…

 

He knew that so long as his master held the rope he was

safe, But…

 

But, he thought, what if while ‘e’s ‘oldin’ me, what if while

‘e’s lowerin’ me, what if while ‘e’s ‘oldin’ the rope while ‘e’s’

lowerin’ me, ‘e starts in to cough an’ lets go? What if while

‘e’s lowerin’ me a wind comes an’ blows ‘im off’a the chimney?

What if ‘e’s still mad at me ‘cause I asked for the baby cat an’

‘e lets go’a the rope?

 

Zachariah looked up, to the speck of light. Lout! Berating

himself. ‘e ain’t gonna let go’a the rope an’ I ain’t gonna fall!

He looked down, to nothing. And, “I ain’t gonna fall!” he

said aloud.

 

Lowering…

 

Whooooo… Whooooo… Moaning, as if in pain, blowing

over and across the mouth of the flue, the wind played its

one, continually hollow note.

 

Whisk… Whisk… The rustle of his swaying, slightly

rotating body upon the bricks.

 

Fearful now of the sounds about him, the boy listened to

the whispered whisk… whisk… whisk… of his clothing upon

the wall and the whooooo… whooooo… whooooo… of the

wind and his eyes opened wider… wider as, looking down,

trying to penetrate the darkness, the boy saw, Tis only brick

‘n mortar, he told himself. Tis only brick ‘n mortar! Tain’t

nothin’. Attempting to convince himself, Nothin’!

 

The moaning wind. The eerie shadows. The whisk of his

body, and the acidic odors of damp soot and ash.

Imagination mixing with claustrophobic fear, Tain’t

nothin’… Nothin’! Zachariah became damp with sweat and

an internal coldness penetrated his clothing. Trembling, he

wrapped his arms about his chest as lowering… inch-by inch…

lowering… foot-by-foot. Lowering so slowly… Till…

 

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Reviewed by Georg Mateos 7/26/2009
If anything one learned fro the philosopher Diogenes when once walking on a forest path he was complaining to himself, "Oh! how poor I am, forced to eat grass leaves..." and after throwing a few of its roots happened to look over his shoulder and saw another man, poorer, eating the root that he had discarded.
One complains about the own childhood when others had it worse, if one only could stop being so sorry of himself...
A moral is in this story as well.

Georg

Reviewed by Carole Mathys 7/25/2009
A most powerful story line, Mark, written very well...

Carole~
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 7/25/2009
Compelling writing, Mark; excellent story! Very well penned; bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend from 102-degree (HAWTTT) Texas, Karen Lynn. :D

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