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Titanic-My Ending-Part l-My Sweet Rose
by Richard J Kallao
Saturday, October 24, 2009

Rated "PG" by the Author.

       
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     what if the Titanic ended differently.
sorry Mr. Cameron hope you don't mind.
original idea and story..............

The Titanic continued it's course but before it's deadly Iceberg encounter Rose and Jack decided too take a lifeboat and leave everyone they knew behind .Days passed and as their lifeboat was guided by the sea .' I love you Rose I too had  had never really said that about anyone not even those that I drew all in my picture I love you .' Rose leaned over and kissed him .

' Me too Jack but now we're together and nothing will seperate us .' Jack shooked his head,' Something sure is going to try .' He pointed too a storm that was moving their way .' Hold on Rose .' They both did and after what seem forever inside the storm their lifeboat drift on a shore or beach of land .Rose opened her eyes and saw in fact palm trees and woke Jack up he saw them too .

' Birds and small animals that were about  ,' commenting on the life as they'd saw moving around them .Even a crab moved up too their life boat and buried itself next to it .Suddenly both Jack and Rose stop moving around .They both listened carefully,they'd heard a sound .  At first Rose in fact thought she knew what it was but didn't want to say nothing .

' Listen,' Rose told him,' Drums .'

too be continued ? If readers like it I had to put my two cents in here . Titanic should had ended better .

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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