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Stargate: Can a Jack Beat Himself part lll-Breedings Apart
by Richard J Kallao
Sunday, November 1, 2009

Rated "PG" by the Author.

       
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     original idea.

' Who are you ? ' Jack had turned and saw a man, but not a man he look like Jack and even more he'd was one of Jack's creations . But Jack did not know that , at first .The other man that look like him explained .

' Why do you look like me ? '

' You'd don't remember ? ' asking his lookalike as both now  stood facing each other, the snake had beating the scorpion and was now was heading too Jack but his lookalike pulled him aside .Jack gave the snake an angry stare and he flipped him a finger .

' You came here on one of your first missions through the Stargate our  civilization was down too fifty and  because we did not know how to produce edible foods make a better smog free system our world was on the very brink of extinction , but you saved us Jack you gave us the abiltity not too just reporoduce but too also achieved greatness here but there was just one flaw in your plan .'

Jack stood listening intently .

' In giving us your DNA you gave us your flaws, the human flaws, and so ever since you left there's been wars ,death  ,starvation .' Then his lookalike then  straightened out what looked like a pair of old pants and torned shirt that in fact look like a Stargate tunic as he shooked his head .He'd was still in his twenties .Jack shooked his head and could not believe him .He could not believe he said he was flawed .

' Me flawed ? ' asked Jack .

 

to be concluded

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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