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Stargate : Can a Jack Beat Himself-part 4-No Stopping Him Now,Jack is Back
by Richard J Kallao
Sunday, November 1, 2009

Rated "PG" by the Author.

       
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' What are you talking about ? ' I asked ,' Jack O' Neill is not flawed .'

He stood looking at Jack,then said,' Perhaps not, but your the reason my world is like it is .' he paused as they heard a sound, something died ,it was in fact the snake itself, someone above must had seen the snake and threw a sword at it .

' Hold onto me,' Jack told the duplicate Jack, rushing he'd grab the end of the sword ,and he'd held on as someone slowly pulled the sword up . Back on the surface of the planet Jack and the duplicate Jack turned but they saw Teal'c looking at them, but an older Teal'c,he had a beard and grabbed the sword taking the snake off it, and slowly putting it in a dark bag he carried over his shoulder like a backpack .

Then slowly holding onto the sword aimed it at Jack neither moved but then the duplicate Jack stepped aside and stood alongside the other Teal'c .' King Tal , this is Jack O'Neill, the original .' King Tal looked at the duplicate Jack and said,' He is indeed .'

He then had too raised his sword higher to where Jack's heart was and shooked his head then in one breath he'd commented ,' So your the one that caused this .' he stared at Jack angrily .

Jack just shrug his shoulders and said,' Indeed .' Suddenly Jack then he reached into a back pants pocket and pulled a pistol . He'd aim it and he'd then fired the pistol at first his duplicate and fired then at King Tal he aim it and fired again .Putting the pistol away Jack stood over King Tal .He laughed and looked at the dead body of King Tal .

' I'am indeed Jack O' Neill .'

to be comcluded i mean it . I added another chapter sorry .

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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