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Stargate-Can a Jack Beat Himself-part 6-Never Let a Jack Fold
by Richard J Kallao
Saturday, November 7, 2009

Rated "PG" by the Author.

       
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The duplicates had surround Jack and the SG-1 had look on and Jack O' Neill still could not believe he was seeing himself .The others were silent as Jack decided to approach him and find out what happen .

' So your me but a duplicate me ? ' asked Jack .

Jack shook his head and he'd started explaining,' No Jack everyone and everything that exist has a counterpart or a twin, like if I was good you be bad , vice versa .But I'd did not like my life after my wife died and I left the SG-1 team where I'd had come from and to  then I came here these people knew nothing except how to live day by day ,they had no idea what pleasures were or desiring something you'd wanted they just lived , can you imagine just living, not knowing what you could get out of life .'

' You interefered with this planet perhaps they were happy the way they'd were ,' said Daniel Jackson,' What gave you the right ? '

Jack turned to him,' This doesn't concern you and by the way Daniel,' the other Jack laughed,' I killed your other half so you have no other half and don't worry Samantha Carter I have no argument against you .'

' That's good to know,' she still shrugged her shoulders .

' Besides your other half was my wife before she had died in a gunfire incident at the base bewtween General Hammond and the rest of the base there he'd betrayed the SG-1 team and I did not want too stay and be implicated any further so I came here and I'm a god here too to these people ,' he turned to the duplicates .

Jack felt his anger grow and he couldn't hold it any longer he look back at the others and he turned and he jumped on the other Jack as the rest of the duplicates went falling to the ground .

' Jack ,no,' shouted Daniel but it was too .

to be continued ?

 

 

 

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