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Stargate- Can a Jack Beat Himself ? : A Jack is Always Better then A Pair
by Richard J Kallao
Sunday, November 8, 2009

Rated "PG" by the Author.

       
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     original idea.
never judge anyone just
by appearences alone...
this is the end for now

Jack was fighting the other Jack the best he'd could as he threw punch afer punch and the other Jack did the same but harder they rolled on top of each other again and again .Suddenly then and  seeing he'd was in trouble and  Teal'c grabbed a Jack and he 'd didn't care which one it was neither .Then  Jack to stood ,the one Teal'c had grabbed the other Jack stood brushing himself off .He'd then  looked at everyone especially the other Jack .He gave him an angry stare at best .

' You alright ? ' asked Samantha Carter not sure neither who was who in fact she was just trying to be polite .

' I'm me ,' cried Jack next too Teal'c smiling trying too hide that he'd was indeed the other Jack , Jack stepped closer to them and pointed out in fact the difference in clothing but no one wanted to say something .After a bit of questioning and answers the SG-1 started to leave as they had discussed that this planet shouldn't have any further contact with Earth .

As the SG-1 was stepping through the Stargate and the real Jack could not believe they'd would leave him behind .He'd turned as the duplicates in fact were just recovering to from being unconscious .Jack had started running after the SG-1 team as the duplicates were running after him .

But Jack was too late , as it  Teal'c was the last one too step through the Stargate it was closing as he reached it .Jack then fell to his knees and he'd looked at the Stargate as it closed on him .Travelling through ,with the SG-1 team  ,the Stargate, the other had had Jack laughed ,But the real Jack could not believe  what had happen to him ,he was stranded .

' No.' the real Jack O'Neill screamed .

the end................................................

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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