AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login    
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    BOOKS    SAMPLE CHAPTERS    AUDIOBOOKS    eBOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    VIDEOS    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Pamela Ackerson, iLaura Cavanaugh, iShirley Woods, iChristina Neely, iJ and C Wordsmiths, iJohn DeDakis, iMartin Treon, iCharlene Proctor, iGibbs Williams, iElla Rydzewski, i

  Home > Mainstream > Stories
Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry      Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

Chessly Lynn Nesci

 Follow Me  

· Contact Me
· Sponsor Me!
· Articles
· Poetry
· Stories
· Blog
· 138 Titles
· 1,042 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Nov, 2009

Chessly Lynn Nesci, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.


Tornado
by Chessly Lynn Nesci
Wednesday, March 3, 2010

Rated "G" by the Author.

       
Recent stories by Chessly Lynn Nesci
· Lonely Girl
· Lonely Girl: Phone Call
· One Night Stand
· Make Believe Land
· Villisca Axe Murder House: Second Visit
· Lonely Girl: The Couch
· Villisca Axe Murder House: Overnight
           >> View all 47


     The lake community had been hit hard by a raging Tornado. We had no warnings and couldn’t prepare for such a disaster. The local sheriff came and took pictures of my cabin. I never lost my electricity and everything was intact. The two hundred year old trees were still hovering over our very old structure. ~Peace~

~Tornado~

 

 

 

I sat outside looking at the beautiful crystal clear water. It always soothes my mind and takes me away from my hectic world. I feel at peace, unhindered and free. Well, this day was far from peaceful. Mother Nature was ready to start some trouble in my neighborhood. The sun was gone in an instant, and black clouds filled the sky.

 

 The wind started to pick up making a twirling action in the water.  I quickly grabbed my tunes and returned to my cabin for shelter. When I got back to my cabin there was a gaunt old man standing at my front door.

 

 “I suppose you need shelter from the storm.” The man said nothing. “Please come in to my home.” I pleaded. The man just nodded yes, and came inside.

 

 I went to the kitchen to make him some hot chocolate. He was so grateful after sipping the entire cup in a matter of seconds.  When I  turned around I heard a door slam. The old man was no where to be found. Two minutes passed and I saw my metal lawn chairs twirling above the lake, then land in my neighbor’s yard.

 

 There were tree limbs everywhere. My new car had a large tree limb that had penetrated through the roof. I looked around and every cabin had been damaged in some way. The neighbor's garage was in my front yard. The roof and walls were still intact but the floor was missing.  My cabin was the only cabin still in one piece. How was that possible? 

 

 The lake community had been hit hard by a raging Tornado. We had no warnings and couldn’t prepare for such a disaster. The local sheriff came and took pictures of my cabin. I never lost my electricity and everything was intact. The two hundred year old trees were still hovering over our very old structure.

 

 That day will always be a mystery. No one else saw that tall elderly gentlemen but me... The only proof I had was the empty cup of hot chocolate that he left behind. ~Peace~

 

 

 

                     Chessly Lynn Nesci

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Want to review or comment on this short story?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?


Reviewed by Jerry Bolton 3/3/2010
Sounds like a visitor with mystic powers to me. Nicely written, Chessly . . .
Reviewed by TONY NERONE 3/3/2010
Wow, I never had to face a tornado, and to be honest I never want to either. The tall older man could have been JESUS. You wrote a story which has the reader guessing at the end. And that is a good thing. Everything about the story was extremely well written. I enjoyed it. I prefer to think the cocoa drinker was JESUS.

GOD BLESS YOU
Tony

Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!

Soldier's Gap by David Schwinghammer

Deputy Dave Jenkins investigates the murder of local high school principal, Jerry Egge, but this is a multi-faceted novel that deals with spiritualism, romance, friendship, and children who fall through the cracks. "Murder isn't usually this  
Member BookAds

Middle Class Outing v2 by RickthePoetWarrior

It's about how middling we are and middle means middle only like a big middle and class isn't school and outing's not a trip.  
Member BookAds

Between Two Eternities by Barbara Brett

Married ten years, and more in love than ever, Robert and Marcie have everything to live for. But a terrible secret is breaking Robert's heart: he knows that Marcie is about to die...  
Member BookAds