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Broken Apart ll: Breaking Down
by Richard J Kallao
Wednesday, December 19, 2012

Rated "PG" by the Author.

       
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Scene 1 : I turned around and thankfully he was gone , he had
had dropped the gun cursed out loud and left  steaming that he
didn't do nothing but I'm not blaming that he didn't I was relived .

             Dane Smith 
   Are you sure because some
   would say you had nightmares
  or you were drunk ,it happened

 

              Able TottleTon
   I did what you told me I kept
    walking suddenly I found I'd
      was alone but then I turned
      on the device you gave me
    and I saw my brother's other
    self, it was very surreal .

Scene 2 :As I talked to my friend and scientist in his own right Dane
was the one that came up with the idea of other realities that existed
with ours and now we had the prove and evidence we needed too .

Scene 3 : Suddenly as Able and Dane talk a door open  and a young
woman appeared she walked up and besides the two men as they had
stopped talking when she came into the room .And she asked why .

            Lynn Tottleton
   Bet you were  talking about me
    And before you stopped talking
     I found out what you two were
     up too, and by the way ,yes .

Scene 4 : My daughter confirmed our thory that someone from the
group within our own facility here leaked information that was in
fact vital to the experiment itself, damn . 
 

                 Dean Smith 
   I was afraid of that ,damn

  Scene 5 : As Dean then had suddenly became aware of then the 
 implications in fact of what they did,Alan realized it to as he look
at his daughter .

Scene 6: Far from this city and another group had the same idea .
Then another group had then  the same idea as theirs did .
                                                    

 

                Nathan Smith 
         My brother didn't think 
         I amount to anything 
         if only he could see us
          now,ha ha .

Scene 7 : Nathan of course was refering to Dean they were
the best of brothers at one time but suddenly Nathan change
and Dean saw this too but didn't like it .

Scene 8 : As the two groups experimented on other realities
a third group but not from this planet was watching what the
groups were doing as two aliens stood in front of a wall size
tv screen watching the humans .

              Syten the First Alien
          Their at it again  I thought we 
        had  taught them a lesson last
         time they had try.
                        

                  Aste the Second Alien
           Apparently not,this time we in
            fact better be more forceful .

 

 Scene 9 : As the aliens watched the camera pans down to
yet another city this one not so populated the citizens were
in affect freightened by what was going on and didn't know
who to turn to for help . They were Amish they had no ways
but their own knowledge and way of doing things life was to
simple there was no technology .

 Scene 10 : I was one of ten that was chosen to make sure
nothing happened to worlds like the Earth before their time
and we make sure it never did,my name was Of.Of to stood
in fact before a wall that displayed different monitor screens
and on one particular screen was displayed the Earth .Camera
was now focussed on the first group of people who had in fact
had discovered the existence of other realities .

                              Of
             It is time these people
              have no idea or clue
              of any sort what they
               have discovered ,not
              yet anyways .

                             

to be continued I promise

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Reviewed by Budd Nelson 12/19/2012
more pray tell
budd

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