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     original,maybe :)

They were not kidding,this mountain was the highest
in the area,cold blistering winds constant,snow every
where,it was below freezing.But its what I loved too a
mountain climber,where else would you see the sheer
beauty of the world that God created for us to enjoy.

I been to many mountains many countries still I get so
emotional during my climb ,no one can blame me .

One thing that one must always remember to is about
noise especialy to this high up and you must be very in
fact very careful what you do when you do it any noise
or sound could bring a landslide of snow that could in
fact bury you alive .

The cold was stronger up hill on top of the mountain
indeed not even any signs of any animal,goat or othe-
rwise could live up here,the cold would kill them .Sad
too,because just the beauty itself of this mountain too
would be worth anyone's time.

I'd turned adjusting the backpack I carried,skies and
poles,flashlights were always a must to,batteries too
even matches if you get stranded up here ,my boots
felt like lead with ice clinging to them,suddenly I had
froze,stop where I was,I didn't even breathe.

Suddenly I looked up,landslide before I could react it
was over,I was buried under a ton of snow thankfully
I was alive for now,too how long will I be I didn't know
for sure ,I dare not move even though I was trap .

Someone help me please .

The probably with being trap is that there isn't no room
to move around,no way you get out ,even if I dug myself
out I fear that the snow over me would bury me so I just
didn't move,like a statue I'd sat there,not even trying too
breathe,it was like being in a nightmare or dream though
I too could not even move a muscle or a hair if I did I was
dead though I knew within hours I be dead then anyways
without air .I think one of my ski poles was still out there
so I might have a bit of hope still , I prayed .

 As I trap there I'd suddenly fell unconscious,but as I slip
into unconsciousness, my mind started playing tricks on
me and I started too see images of people I knew up until
now,places I ben too .

I saw my life flash before me . Damn I wasn't going to make
this one,and no one knew where I was I wanted this too be
a quiet vacation away from everyone .

to be continued,part ll.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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