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Hollow Dreams part l
by Richard J Kallao
Wednesday, March 5, 2014

Rated "PG" by the Author.

       
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 It started out normal enough and yet something went wrong,terribly wrong. A baby was born the family that had the baby was happy people cheered in fact the only person that was not happy was the baby himself  This was not suppose to be his time,not yet he knew that and yet he was born here to this family .Then the  baby then to the family was name after a God Mercury and unlike the God he was name onto the baby had no body anyone would admire that like Hercules or Samson, Or he was not even smart or intelligent like Zeus.
 

No this baby name was Mercury had no special gifts,no talent that no one would be in awe of,no intellect,not yet anyways,that people would point to and say look at me I'm Mercury. Suddenly though during the fifth year of the baby being born and raise Mercury suddenly show signs he knew more then most at his age,then too especially about the planets themselves.The family knew with this special talent he would have to be protected from those that would want too use his gift for bad reasons or too then  hurt him because he was different .Suddenly even though he had a family now the young Mercury had enemies as well.
 

And then there was one particular enemy that took interest in Mercury his name was Odin ,and his namesake people feared .His father was the devil himself, Satan . And Satan was not to please at the hearing of the birth of this child . All hell broke loose and the souls there suddenly in fact knew the wrath of Satan more then they wanted to. 

Satan's anger tore the world apart . God then knew it would subside in days he knew he was not allowed to interefere with Satan's realm and yet he wish he could because even those poor souls at one time or another even asked God for help . But then God did help those who ask but still they had sinned,tried too redeem themselves but God saw that they had lost faith in him and so they fell from grace instead .

to be continued,part ll. 
 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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