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He Was Tricked By Others Thoughts
by La Wanda Sharriese
Saturday, June 14, 2014

Rated "PG" by the Author.

       
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     He was tricked by the thoughts of others.

 Allison and Mark were married for over tweny-seven years. They were owners of a great catering business and they were proud parents of three children. Two in which were grown and had their own families. They had one other son who was ready to graduate. Chad was a Junior in High Scool.

 

One day Allison was rushed to the Emergency room with a horrible pain to her abdomen. When Mark heard that she had been rushed to the hospital he quickly went to see what was going on with his wife.

 

     "Hello Dr. Williams, how is she?"

      "Hello Mr. Daniels, we had to do an emergency hyterectomy on your wife, she was hemorrhaging from the insde and we had no choice but to perform the surgery sir."

Mark looked as if he had said she passed away.

      "Mr. Daniels, are you okay?"

      "Yes, I am okay, what all did you have to remove from her body?"

       "Well SIr, because of the degree of scar tissue we found, we had to remove her cervix and on of her fallopian tubes."

Mark could not beleve his ears.

He called his uncle who had been telling him all his life... '6nce a woman has a hysterectomy you can no longer feel her womb and she can not satisfy you sexually and she was no longer a complete woman."

After Allison was released from the hospital, Mark no longer slept in the same bed with her. He would make up excuses to why he would not sleep in the bed with her.

     
His wife told him numerous of time...."Mark, you can lay down with me baby, I am feeling much better now."

       "No , I will wait until you heal completely." He said to her, not even looking at her.

       "I am okay really, you can start back sleeping in our bed from now on, I really appreciate you for allowing me a chance to heal, but you can lay in the bed with me, I miss you being next to me."

     "No, I am good, you have to make sure you are healed completely, I am good sleeping on the couch for now."

Allison felt really funny deeply inside, she knew that he as always the one who loved to cuddle and he was always all up under her all the time especially when they were in bed.

She asked him if something else was wrong.

     "Nah, why you ask that, I am good."

Even though he said that there was nothing wrong, Allison knew that was far from the truth.

Three months later Mark told Allison that he was moving out because he was no longer in love with her.

She asked him why, what had she done and what about their son and the business that they started together.

He was not hearing anything that she had to say, he just wanted out of the marriage.

He finally moved out.

Allison was hurt, but she soon moved on with her life, she still ran the business and it was doing well.

It was the day of their youngest son's high school grduation.

Everyone was excited and ready for the big day.

After the graduaton was over they all met at the Banquet Hall to celebrate.

When Mark and his new wife walked in the room, is when he suddenly realized that he forgot to have the food catered for that day, everyone was standing around looking wondering where the food was.

Mark began calling around trying to find some one who could cater and deliver enough food for all the people they had invited.

Allison stepped to him and asked him how could he had forgotten such an important day and for him not to worry about it she had cooked at home and they were leaving.

He grew so upset that he yelled out in front of all the guest... "That is why I left you, you are not a whole woman, you are nothing, you do not have all your insides!"

Everyone looked at him as if he was crazy.

After he had made a fool of himself, he looked down at his wife ans she was standing there with her hands on her hips, looking at him as if he had lost his mind and she then said... "What do you mean she is not a whole woman, I do not have all my insides, I  had a hysterectomy over ten years ago and I know that I am a still a whole woman."

The look that he had on his face. LOL

 

 

 

       
  

 

     

 

 

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Reviewed by m j hollingshead 6/17/2014

poignant read
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 6/15/2014
Interesting and tragic. I wonder how many marriages have been broken up by myths like this. When I hear what some Congress members have to say about women, and how many religions view women, I have no doubt that it is more common than people would suspect.

My helper runs a shop. It seems like every day she comes home with something strange that her customers tell her. Most of it is bull shit, but since she has a rather compassionate person she tends to believe their authority even though they might be wrong. I'm glad that I'm here to help correct some of the fallacies she hears.

You have a few typos that you should edit out.

Ron

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