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 Opening Scene: In a bedroom then too  in a small house somewhere in America a small boy awakens from his nightmare .

                                                The Small Boy
                                         Mommy ! Please Hurry !
 

Scene One: Then the camera pans down a hallway leading from the stairs to the boy's room as a young woman rushing up the stairs and runs down then the hallway,she is twenty seven years old and her and her son are alone for the first time since her husband had to start working .
 

Scene Two: Then the  boy is sitting up in bed still screaming for his mother as he is sweating all over his body ,the door to his room flies open as his mother rushes in . She has a concern expression on her face as she goes to his side . She immediately ask what is the problem,why was he so nervous .
 

Scene Three: As then  the boy explains then  to his mother why he is so in fact  nervous and sweated behind them then the  bedroom window slowly opens up there is the creaking noise that follows it .Both the mother and boy turn.
 

Scene Four:As they then turn the camera focusses on the window as it still goes up suddenly both of them see a face on the other side of the window but cannot make out the face or who it belongs to since it is dark outside .
 

Scene Five: Suddenly then to  there is thunder and the face disappears both mother and son screamed as the window closing breaks and rain starts to come down  from overhead now .
 

                                             The Small Boy 
                                           I'm scared mommy 

 

Scene Six : Instead then too of the mother returning to her room she stayed with the boy, unfortunately as night progressed the boy did not sleep.He kept looking out at the broken window and the storm that was passing by,the mother tried desperately to reassure him .

                                                      The Mother 
                                       Now if only I can reassure myself

Scene Seven : As then both tried to sleep or pretend they were sleeping one floor below in the house an errie coldness had come over the downstairs area as finally the boy had fallen asleep as the mother started singing to him

Scene Eight: Then the boy fell asleep after the mother sang but both had the feeling that .they then were being watched or someone was in the house with them but the mother stayed with the boy all night .
 

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