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KE: Chapter 2 - A Promising Planet
by Ronald W. Hull
Tuesday, January 12, 2016

Rated "G" by the Author.

       
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     I have been accused of not describing the extra terrestrials and their spacecraft in sufficient detail. But I would challenge anyone who would think they know what these beings and their craft are really like. That's why I chose to be brief and vague. I didn't wish to delve into earthly fantasy.

 Universal Explorer in Deep Space: 703 BC, Earth Time

Dom was communing with the Collective.  It was now 1528 rotations since his relief.  And he felt as one with them.  His mission was clear, and it gave him purpose.  Though he retained his original form, his mind was melded seamlessly with the others in symbiosis, no matter how far away he was.

Dom’s craft was hurtling through space at nearly the speed of light, but he had long since stopped worrying about hitting anything.  A living being itself, the ship had an uncanny way of detecting obstacles and adjusting its speed and direction while unerringly maintaining its course.  Gathering space debris, dark matter and radiated energy as it went, the craft reinvented and renewed itself as it traveled--space dust in, space dust out.  The perfect blending of form and function. 

Dom's craft was one of billions of such vehicles seeking a way to unite the Universe.  But the Universe was vast and expanding at the speed of light, faster than his craft, and the task required all those who had been given relief.  The task was simple:  To seek out and relieve intelligent life.  Dom had not done so yet.  It was his first time.  While life was abundant, intelligent life was much rarer.  Even in the right conditions, it took billions of years for intelligent life to evolve.  Life was very fragile and the stars kept evolving, creating cataclysmic disasters that in an instant, would annihilate life on a planet, in a solar system, or half a galaxy.  It was almost too horrible to contemplate.  Imagine a star growing old and larger, consuming its planets as it did.  Unless life on those planets was capable of escaping their own sun, the source of their lifeblood, they would be consumed.  Hence, Dom's mission: to provide relief before the cataclysm arrived.  There was 100% chance over billions of years, that it would.  Such was the urgency of his mission. 

Dom was not alone on the ship; there were millions like him.  Even though he knew the thoughts of all the others, Dom’s thoughts were his own.  Like his body, now made as perfect as possible, he was separate, but still part of the Universal Intelligence. He carried it with him.  He was not in touch.  The distances were too great.  Until the physical limit imposed by the speed of light was breached, this was the only way to proceed.

Before Dom in the large chamber, floated a model of a solar system the Collective was studying.  It lay over 1896 light rotations off, and the Senses had been gathering information from it for many rotations.  It was one of many candidates, sifted down from billions in their range, and their collective decision about it would forever determine the course of their journey.  This system contained a single star, insuring more stable system gravitational forces, of medium age.  The system had eight primary planets, revolving with sufficient distance apart to reduce collisions, and enough matter and energy to produce life.  But was there intelligent life?  The third and fourth planets, and two of the secondary planets of the great, fifth planet, showed the most promise.  Calculating all factors, including gravity, rotation, stability, raw material, and energy, the system most probably contained life.  And, there had been time for intelligent life to evolve.  But, aside from the reflected light, over 1896 light rotations old, from the system's star off the bodies in question, there was no evidence of intelligent life.

The signature of intelligent life was clear, and the Universal Intelligence knew it well. Dom had never heard or seen it, but he knew what to look for.  Intelligent life forms had advanced technology and communicated with electromagnetic waves that traveled at the speed of light and escaped their star systems.  First, there would be faint sounds above the galactic noise, in patterns, like tapping.  And then, there would be simple voices and music. Finally, images, first in shades of gray, and then in many colors, and then in three dimensions, that would flow from the planet like a beacon.  These radiations developed at different time frames, depending on the planet and the nature of the intelligence.  But the Universal Intelligence was infinitely patient.  All that was needed for the Senses to lock on for contact was the simple tapping pattern, insuring intelligence.  The other forms would grow in complexity, like life itself, as the Explorer approached.

With a thought, Dom turned off his gravity and floated to the third planet.  Colored in blue, white, brown and green, this planet showed the most promise of the lot.  The blue meant water.  The white signaled clouds, snow or ice.  The brown was the planet itself or dead vegetation.  And green signaled plant life.  The Senses and his own mind told him that this planet was a fertile bed for life.  Dom had seen such planets before, teeming with life, but the Senses had passed them by.  This planet was older than those, and more stable.  It held great promise.  He touched it, turned it in his hands, and absorbed its data.  He could see and feel its mountains, valleys, and rivers flowing.  With its gravitational field, and water covering most of its surface, he sensed an atmosphere rich and heavy, yet transparent, revealing its surface through wispy clouds of ice crystals. Yes, until a better candidate was found, the Universal Explorer would, unerringly, head for this one. 

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Reviewed by Lark Pogue 2/7/2016
Completely unexpected. Very interesting way to approach and bring to life this book. I am ready to read the next chapter.
Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald 2/4/2016
I am really enjoying this work

hug
Kathy
Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger 1/16/2016
~Ron~
Universal in discovery. Exciting.

Lady Mary Ann
Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci 1/12/2016
Oh, yeah, hon!!!! Keep giving it to 'em!!

Love ya!

Jane
Reviewed by Eva Pasco 1/12/2016
Ron,

Until others have walked a mile in our shoes, they're entitled to their opinion and nothing more. We, as writers, navigate our stories based on our own whims and instincts.

Now, the chapter: Futuristic, but certainly not a farfetched premise based on the true scientific principle of stars self-destructing. In years to come explorers like Dom will need to seek out planets to sustain life when our sun is on the verge of burning out.

A reader brings his or her own imagination to the story so I've no criticism about lack of details. I enjoyed it.

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