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A View Like No Other
By Odin odin@aflx.com
Last edited: Saturday, November 11, 2017
This short story is rated "G" by the Author.
       
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Personifying the unexpected can present experiences of inanimate objects with unique points of view. (The formatting of this piece wouldn't work for the whole thing. Go figure. Sorry about) that.

A View Like No Other




Hanging chained sign
             am I
                     Established 1933
                               "Bakery" my name
Swinging through time my game
               just lettin'' concrete canyon winds
                             wind their way around and through
                                            glass and steel hives of commerce
Uptown
Downtown
All around

Like a trapeze artist
                in perpetual motion
                                   I see
                                        I hear
                                              swirls of
                                                       people
Animals
Things
all day
every day
right here
corner 10th and 46th

Above me used to house hooker delights
                Below me from the bakery goods
     fresh from the oven once flowed oohs and ahs
                              Others from tourists
               mesmerized with this month''s
                               shell game antics
                                              atop unstable card table 
                                                                        
To my left
                                                       Bus stop misery
                            Express and local depression alike
            Bench for daytime waiting
Slab for nighttime sleeping

To my right
          Pimps on alert
                      Hookers on the beat
                                    Down the block
                                               Johns pulled to the curb

    Quite a location actually
One way or another
my corner will always parade realities
Foreign to many
understood by some

  Got a mongrel dog as company
Beasty always stations himself
low to my left trash can / high to his right me

Doesn''t bark
Never whines
Just howls his harmony
Hound-dog-rap
my pimp friend called it
Every once in a while
the preacher came by
placed his box on the corner
climbed aboard
raised his Bible
                                                      and ranted                                                      

  Hooker delights stopped
  Oohs and ahs ceased
Beasty took some nap time
pimps
hookers
even "I love NY" tourists
scurried to the cross walks
Anywhere
but here
their eye-rolls in seeming unison

  Oh man...
here comes sunrise

Special today
I mean
Special Special

Winds
nowhere
People
nowhere
Hooker delights
somewhere
Bakery scents...

It all used to be everywhere
Beasty was always at the ready
Got his bagel every morning
A smear of chopped liver on top
He was good for the day

But

Today is the day
Waitin'' for the wrecking ball
Retirement time
Due to start at seven sharp

So while I can
gonna enjoy maybe
my last view

This view...

It was
like no other
you know


 

    

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Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on November 11, 2017
I know that corner; been there, done that. The ultra West Side, the ass-end of Times Square. Thoroughly enjoyed this romp thru Hell's Kitchen.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on November 11, 2017
an enjoyable tale

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on November 11, 2017
There's nothing like a talking sign, or rather one singing his swan song, as seen by the inner eye of one whose imagination mirrors life with more swag and panache than life itself.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 11, 2017
A fly on the wall in the form of a sign on the street. Whenever I got to a big city, I always enjoyed going to that part of town and gawking. Actually never hung out those places like that sign did until the wrecking ball came along and the view was gone forever. Sometimes we mourn the bad things.

Ron