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Time Moves Closer
By Odin odin@aflx.com
Last edited: Wednesday, June 12, 2019
This short story is rated "G" by the Author.
       
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Some years ago in this flash fiction/prosetry amalgamation, I tried to picture the planet’s technology leaping ahead exponentially. As such, today, the leap makes it easy to forget how isolated and intimate this change, this new brand of happiness, is becoming. Perhaps, we need to pay closer attention? (Image by pinterest)

 

Time Moves Closer

Mail boat paddles along the coast
Carrying a single letter
Tiny island shore
Sits idle
For now

Clouds gather
Sky darkens
Dolphins cease jumping
Flotsam hugs wet sands
Yellow dry newspaper headlines
Remain like a large bleached leaf
Entangled in yolk of ancient driftwood antlers
"Manned Spacecraft prepares a landing on Mars"

A single palm shades pre-war colonial house
Island's sole resident

Threadbare cargo-shorts
Held up by aged leather tool belt
Hang limply on thin carved hips
Artist looks skyward
Pulls welding helmet down
Eyes peer through ocean spotted lens
Solar paneled energy
Sparks welding torch
Final stringer bead
Hot pass
Filler pass
Cover pass
Complete

Artist raises head upwards as
2 story lightning bolt
Secured in buried concrete pedestal
Casts shadow
Even as its reflection
Disappears into impending weather
Stepping backward off platform
Artist lifts helmet
Assesses

It is good
Pointing eastward
Like a rocket ready for count down
The artist’'s passion readies its imaginary launch

Yet

There is menace riding the wind
Tragedy waiting

Hover-craft arrives
Mini-hover comes ashore
Robotic arm delivers letter
Artist sits
Stares at envelope

The sea suddenly sounds weary
Seagull lands on sculpture
Lifts one leg
Holds
Drops his white calling card
Remains nervous
Flies away

Artist smiles
Pet giant tortoise lumbers up
Settles beside Artist
Head peeks
Retreats
Waits
From pocket
Artist pulls treat
Lays in front  of shell
Pauses

Glances back at envelope
Embossed letter head
Fathoms Deep Collider Project

Opens
Reads
Utters notice
"Tsunami Alert – Nuclear testing to begin on  September 23rd"

Looks over at turtle
Up at sculpture
Out to sea
"3 months---not much time"

Mail boat passes other side of island
Makes no stop
Only an ancient church stands on shore
Robotic camera digitizes weathered tombstones huddling close
They too seem to be trembling

 


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Reviewed on August 31, 2019
No more mail,eh? No need for it, I guess. Great message plus its so real. Real is scarey in this day and age, Odin.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 13, 2019
Reads like you may have welding experience. The visual image of this flash fiction is striking in its simplicity and fatal loneliness. A way of life that is doomed by the mad rush of progress. I'm reminded of the Islanders who had to leave the Bikini Atoll before H-bomb testing.

But if this is set in the future, a single letter being delivered by a single mail boat, however automated, seems a bit passé when in the future, the letter is going, going… gone in the face of the ever present digital message over the Internet.

Ron

Reviewed by A. Frailey
Reviewed on June 13, 2019
"not much time" seems to be our modern day refrain. But that's perhaps the beauty of art...to hold the moment. To give the human spirit pause. To look and see and smile...or tremble. Great poem, Odin. Your visuals grip the heart.