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Anonyma
by Haim kadman
Friday, December 25, 2020

Rated "G" by the Author.

       
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     A certain chap meets his friends after a certain event.

 

Anonyma

 

As soon as he entered the pub his friends looked up at him, with worried faces.

‘What’s the matter with him?’ Someone asked in a whisper, Although Ed heard it, he joined his three friends’ table, and sat down facing them.

‘Well you’ve surely heard the question Ed.’ Don turned to him with a stern look on his face.

‘Yeah I’ve heard it, I’m fine and sorry to be that late.’

‘Did you hear what he said? He’s sorry, and we sat here waiting for you since five pm pal.’

‘Yeah and we’ve got some twenty five minutes left to learn where you have been, if you don’t mind of course.’ Another one of his friends remarked.

‘Well you do know that I’d a date?’

‘Sure Ed but how it came out? Watching your pale face means you aren’t going to buy a wedding ring, are you?’ Bill said smiling and they all burst out laughing.

‘Well yes it’s early yet, but I’ve met an extremely beautiful wench a real jewel; and I did all I could to court her to her satisfaction, just like a bird of paradise male dancing on a tree branch before her eyes. But it looks like I’ll have to work much harder, to make her mine.’

‘What’s her name Ed, do we know her?’ One of them dared to ask.

‘That’s none of your business boys.’

‘Okay the next rounds are on you lover boy!’

© Haim Kadman 2019 - all rights .reserved.

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Reviewed by Ronald Hull 12/26/2020
One way to ruin a romance is to get your buddies involved. I was shocked literarily, not actually, by Ed, who was not anonymous anymore, declaring that this new amor was a "wench?" I didn't think that they qualified as good long-term wives or lovers. Just more of the same one night stands with bar crawlers who were palpable for one night only. Only the lonely.

Ron

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