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Today's Tomorrow
By Odin odin@aflx.com
Last edited: Friday, December 17, 2021
This short story is rated "G" by the Author.
       
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Some flash fiction (or, to coin a phrase: flash fact) to recall at a young age, Sunday School caused strange imaginations in my brain. Perhaps certain imaginations are perpetual unless some were real and not imagined. Shrinks love that kind of stuff, you know? And one mustn’t forget, ignis fatuus needn’t sleep. Your nocturnal brain, loving lucidity, makes sure of that. (Image by pinterest)

 

Today’s Tomorrow

 

The joyride of endless worth,

Such is how I remember awakening from this lucid dream.

 

With Dad at the wheel of a ’41 Ford sedan,

Mother beside him,

Picnic napkins folding,

I in the back seat,

Festive picnic basket at my side,

My dog sleeping on the floorboard,

All was good.

 

Like a chariot from Classic Comics,

Down the road we rolled,

Sunset straight ahead,

Flies,

Grasshoppers,

Cicadas dotting the windshield,

 

Until…

 

Veering off the highway onto

A well-travelled dusty road,

Dad shot to the north,

Heading for the forest of Boxelder,

Rolling past beer cans,

And Twinkie wrappers,

Until coming to a stop

Beside a lazy creek.

 

But…

 

My reverie took on chimera-like intensity.

 

First the radio’s Bible thumping preacher

Lost his voice ‘cause…

Who knows?

 

Such panic in their faces.

Oh, dear Lord,

Came the duet of parents

What next?

 

All four tires deflating flat?

Springs popping out of the simple flannel upholstery

Like a nest of deceitful snakes?

 

My little mind was imagining too much.

 

Trying to remain calm

The picnic provided solace.

 

Later that night,

Driving home past a field of weeds,

Dad swore he heard giggles

Coming from an abandoned hearse.

 

After stopping…

 

Not a peep.

 

Bedside prayers

Asked all be forgiven,

Dad particularly contrite

For the souls giggling.

 

They’ve a long way to go

‘til the day of resurrection,

Right Mother?

 

Son?

 

But I was graduating into a nocturnal dream

Remanding daydreams until…

Today’s tomorrow.


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 18, 2021
A very appropriate image. Is that a praying hearse or a preying one?

I'm having a little trouble since this is a true account. I think that you were daydreaming going down the road, but was your father, too? I think I understand why the preacher stopped on the radio. It was common in those days with AM radios, to lose the signal even with very fine Ford radios that my father really liked.

I believe your father had a lot of biblical ways of explaining his experiences. I like how you thought the possible calamities that would follow in the Ford after the preacher quit.

Ron