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Love's Tanacity
By Odin odin@aflx.com
Last edited: Thursday, September 7, 2023
This short story is rated "G" by the Author.
       
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Some think that love is reserved for the young. Others believe love transcends youth. Still others believe there is no end to love. (Image by Joey Kennedy

 

 

Love’s Tenacity                                    

 

Each morning,
through windows high up,
Manhattan’s light beckons heavy eyelids of sleep,
opening one, then two eyes to embrace another day,
even as foreshadowing reminds one, as always
of inevitable late-night insomnia.

Still…

The daylight hours beckon,
where the residue of faded yesterdays
surrounds today like a Greek chorus of tragedian echoes
careening off walls of cavernous avenues.

On the street…

Desire’s flirtatious bounce,
now languid with age,
remains alert for notice,
defies rejection,
lifts its weathered optimism skyward,
inhaling hope’s aura once again.

At times…

Longing winds its way gracefully through
emotion’s Central Park,
forever freshening seasonal colors
basking overhead,
sheltering these first-kiss spawning grounds,
where bench upon bench,
remains infatuation’s favorite meeting place,
rousing memories once again,
turning over the tattered folds of intimacy’s once smooth velvet
now but threadbare cover for loneliness.

Still…

On a good summer day’s end,
beneficence spreads its long shadows
offering its nightly solace to the innocent,
its bravery of romance to keep alive
its ghost-like allure.

In the near distance,
rhythmic subway rumbles and cab horns
layered by a neighbor’s domestic rife,
harmonize with nature’s thunder-cloud drums
pounding the sky into the gray of sympathy.

As firmament’s kettledrum rolls closer,
the many small windowed enclosures containing leftover youth
continue the faith that tomorrow can be another beginning,
that the winds of love never fully dry the tears of disappointment,
for such weeping is always needed
to nurture the seedlings of hope,
and the patience to endure tomorrow’s privilege
to pursue life’s most precious gift
for another day,
another sunset,
another chance to be love.


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 9, 2023
From the intro, I expected you to go beyond Manhattan, but that place always draws you back to the wonderful time when you had freedom of choice and little else to drive you onward on your search for love and success.

I never experienced a place with so many possibilities where one could fall in and out of love within walking distance. Or, perhaps, a short cab ride in the rain. Why so many love stories in the movies are set there.

I played the field, rather than settling for safely marrying a high school sweetheart. My eye was success first before settling down to babies and diapers. Perhaps, it was a mistake because I never really settled down until forced to by age and circumstance.

Back to your prosetry, throughout this passage there are many phrases that are memorable and beautifully written in a very poetic way. I often wish I could write like that from my practical, straightforward mind.

Ron