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Dawn's Hopeful Skeletons
By Odin odin@aflx.com
Last edited: Monday, June 24, 2024
This short story is rated "G" by the Author.
       
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Climate change seems perpetual in some parts of America. Wind seems to use such places as a practice/rehearsal before moving on. (Painting by Dominic Piperata)

  

Dawn’s Hopeful Skeletons

 

 

 

The collapsing thunderstorm ended.

The dust storm began.

 

My southwest allegiance

Found me with handkerchief across my nose

As I crossed my small-town street,

Wind whipping my moo-moo about my legs

Like a self-flagellation penance.

 

My son carried his frosty bottle of Coke,

While my daughter held her Barbie ever so tight

The dolls hair whipped away moments before.

 

Like nomads of old,

We battled the swirling whorls of sand,

Desperately trying to keep the dust

From our eyes.

 

And…

 

Like so many days of the summer,

The wind decided to rest again

Allowing us to see the sparse vegetation

Spreading across a barren land

Surrounding our simple

But never calm

Town.

 

As always…

 

The hopeful skeletons

Of new and old structures

Re-opened their doors

For that anticipation of a few hours

Maybe even days

When the farmers could once again

Play checkers

In front of the old Sinclair gas station,

Grumble about the price of eggs,

And laugh at the cursed elderly stubbornness

That has kept them ornery,

But alive.


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 26, 2024
Read like I was going back a few years. I even experienced a dust storm on my way to California in 1966 in Idaho, I believe. But after a long life, I have experienced many storms and a few wildfires and come away okay from all of them, even Harvey dumping 42 inches of rain in 2 days on my doorstep.

But I was reminded of the 1930s dust bowl which may be coming again when the central aquifer runs out of water irrigating much of the Midwest. Those very hard times leaving a bad taste in the minds of men who became older and ornery.

I certainly hope that my novel, The Last Wanderer, with its wildfires and economic and social collapse, doesn't come to pass. But the climate changing is very real and destroying the underpinnings of our very lives with those in power not seeming to notice. The millions of creatures under our feet in the soil that are going extinct while we try to eradicate weeds from our lawns and crops with chemicals.

I guess all we can say is, thanks for the memories, and let the children of today fight he greatest war of their lives.

Ron