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When an Angel Whispers
by Tess Thompson  Charlene Tess and Judi Thompson 
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Category:  Mystery/Suspense
Publisher: Charlene Tess and Judi Thompson

Type: Fiction

Pages: 264

Copyright: 
Februrary 2015
Price: $3.99 (eBook)


After a woman escapes from a vicious serial killer, she returns as an FBI agent to help find The Bayor Butcher before he can kill again.

Macy Adams, a beautiful college student, is abducted and brutalized by a vicious serial killer known as the Bayou Butcher. She escapes with the help of a guardian angel and Houston Police Detective Chance O’Brian. After fleeing her captor, she tries to start a new life, but is plunged back into his murderous grasp by circumstances beyond her control. More women are murdered, and only Macy can help the FBI catch the Butcher before he kills again. What they don’t know is that this time he is out for revenge and is pulling Macy into his carefully planned trap.  



Excerpt

“Give light, and the darkness will disappear of itself.”
Desiderius Erasmus


Ba Boom! Ba Boom! Ba Boom! The noise was deafening. A drum or a clock. Yes, a tick but no tock. Not a clock. Not a drum. Louder. Hammering. Beating. Ba Boom! Ba Boom! Ba Boom!

Macy moved her head from side to side and tried to open her eyes. Where was she? What was that sound? She was in a terrible dream. The kind that you have when you want to scream and scream, but you can’t. You try to run and your feet won’t move. It’s as if they are glued to the floor. Why couldn’t she open her eyes? Why couldn’t she see?

Macy reached to cover her ears. Her chest ached from the vibrations. Her hands refused to move. Her legs were paralyzed. She realized her eyes were already open and she gasped for air.

She could hear the pounding even louder coming from deep inside. Inside of her. Macy realized the pounding was her own heart beating inside her chest. “Oh God! Oh God! Oh God!”

Darkness! “Oh my God!” She exhaled slowly. Was she blind? Or was she just trapped? Would she stay in this darkness forever? Once, when she was a teenager during a truth or dare game, somebody asked her to name her worst fear. She hadn’t told the truth then. To do so would have made it real. Make it something that could really happen. But, it did happen.

This was her nightmare. The one she’d had since childhood. To be trapped, in darkness with no one. Alone. Left to go insane for all of eternity.

Macy sucked air into her lungs. It hurt to breathe. She could only manage small puffs. Tears poured down her face, and she sobbed in desperation.

Again, she pulled at her arms, but they were held down. She couldn’t move. Confused and bewildered, she cried harder. Her body shook with spasms. What had happened to her? Was she dead? She began to recite her childhood prayer.

“Macy,” a soft voice spoke to her from the darkness. A woman’s voice. “Macy, hush.” The voice caressed her. “You aren’t alone. I am here with you.
”
The woman’s voice was low and raspy, and Macy strained to hear her. She spoke with an accent Macy didn’t recognize. Macy often heard Cuban or Mexican accents since she moved from Florida to Houston, Texas, but this was different. She felt someone hold her hand and rub her arm. The woman’s touch was like silk. It soothed her and Macy found that her tremors lessened.

“I’m dead aren’t I? Am I in hell? No, can’t be. I don’t believe in hell. Where am I? What happened to me? What have I done to deserve this?” Macy began to sob again and found it difficult to swallow. Her throat was raw from her screams.

“No, my little one, not dead.” the voice whispered. “You are very much alive, and I will help you stay that way. But, you must listen, Malyshka, and do what I tell you. He will be back soon.”

Macy pulled her arms again and discovered why she couldn’t move them. Her wrists were bound above her head, and it felt like her feet were bound as well. Because of the soothing voice and calming presence of the woman, her horror eased.

“Please, oh please, untie me,” she pleaded. “ I can’t move. I can’t breathe. I can’t see. Am I blind?”

“No, not blind, but blindfolded. You are in a dark and evil place. I would gladly free you if I had the power, but I do not. I cannot. I can only be with you and guide you.”

The voice seemed to be moving away, getting softer, and became more difficult to hear.”

“Oh, don’t go. Don’t leave me. Please don’t leave me,” Macy begged.

A whisper in her ear. A soft flutter on her skin. “I will not leave you. You are a strong girl. You will survive. I know this. I have seen it. Hush now. He is back and you must pretend to be asleep.”

“But, who are you? Where am I?” Macy was building toward hysteria again.

“Shh. Evil is here. Close your eyes now. Be brave,” the voice whispered as it moved away.

Macy swallowed and listened for whoever he was. She heard what sounded like a door open and was about to scream for help when she heard a man say in a sing-song voice, “Macy, oh Macy. I’m here. I’ll bet you can’t wait to see me!”

Macy swallowed again, closed her eyes, and followed the woman’s warning. She pretended to be asleep.



Professional Reviews

Houston Angle enhanced a great story!
Enjoyed this book very much. It was easy to imagine the action happening in the Houston area. Living here myself for 34 years, I really enjoyed the references to places that have become very familiar to me. The story and characters were engaging and I always appreciate a strong heroine and a good man. This story has both! (Several actually. )
Babushka was an endearing character who looked out for her loved ones in a truly unique way. We could probably all use a Babushka in our lives. Her angelic presence added a poignant sweetness to the story.

I didn't figure out "who done it" until almost the end, so this story truly kept me spellbound. Now I am waiting to see what happens next with Macy and Chance. Hope we get to find out soon!


1 Great Read!
Starts off fast and grabs your attention right from the first paragraph. An exciting blend of suspense and human emotion. Lots of twists that leave you guessing until the very end. I great read!


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Reviews for "When an Angel Whispers"

Reviewed by Kim Aalaie 5/1/2018
Occasionally you come across a book that is such a well-written, interesting story-line and characters that the proverbial phrase "to good to put down" applies, but such is "When An Angel Whispers." The plot pulls you in almost immediately and the author, Tess Thompson, begins weaving side plots with all those involved. The characters are introduced in great detail and provided their own easy to follow story-line on the side of the main plot. The story allows for several twists and turns with a surprising conclusion once all twists and turns are put together!

Even though I enjoyed the book immensely, misspelled words, missing words and other editing issues were to frequent for the reader to ignore or disregard...it's a shame really because it is really a well-written book.
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