LeJuan Martin is a professional basketball player who thought that the best way to get rid of his depression was to seek companionship. Atlanta-bred songstress, Tanisha Ryan has Darren, who is credited for helping secure her record deal, with a major label and for his wandering eyes. Jamaal Henry returns to the arms of his ex. With his infidelity adding on to a host of other issues, he has to face the demons of his past, which may damage his acting career.
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"The readers will love this material...I am impressed with the imagination. This will be a success," Writer's Literacy Services
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Critique Section - This information will be provided by the Critic: Cynthia Sherman
The Current Title - How catchy is it? How well does it convey the information in the manuscript?
The Liar’s Truth
by Tyree Blackamore
This title is catchy, and it conveys the information in the manuscript. This is an outstanding title, and it will draw your potential readers in. Nice choice.
The Current Synopsis - How catchy is it? Does it intrigue?
The current synopsis is catchy and intriguing.
The Current Length of the Work - Is it appropriate for the target market?
The current length of this work is around 70,115 words
The target market is for Readers of all social classes between the ages of 25 and 40
I agree with this target market. This manuscript will have mass appeal.
What is the power of the opening 3-5 sentences?
These sentences are powerful. They introduce characters, a setting, and they set the tone. This is a nice beginning. The readers will be hooked.
Dialogue (if any) - Describe and comment.
The dialogue is easy to understand and follow. The readers will appreciate the ease with which this may be read. Nice work.
The dialogue fits the characters nicely
Other/Conclusion
This is an interesting manuscript. The readers will love this material I am impressed with your imagination and writing skills. The characters are fabulous, as is the plot. This will be a success.
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