Mack's friends suggested he visit a quaint town in Washington State called Leavenworth, but they had an ulterior motive—a motive that resulted him agreeing to help one of their friends track down her missing sister. That led him to the remote small town of Watson Falls and a situation and people more deadly than he could have ever imagined.
Mack Peters is a self-made millionaire who was once a Los Angeles cop. When his friend suggested a trip to picturesque Leavenworth, Washington, he had no idea it would lead him to the little-known town of Watson Falls, a secret more deadly than he would ever imagine, and a search for a missing investigative reporter.
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WATSON FALLS
A Small Town With A Deadly Secret
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MACK
On a beautiful, sunny Sunday morning in 2008 Mack Peters chose a table in a shaded part of the patio at Rick’s Cafe on south Beverly Drive. It was a rare occasion when he could enjoy an early morning breakfast with his father, Beverly Hills Police Chief Bill Peters. After he took a bite of his omelet, Mack leaned his six-foot-three frame back in the metal armchair and stretched his long legs.
“Hey, Dad, this is one of those days that just can’t get any better, isn’t it? Wonderful weather, great food, but most of all a chance to spend time together.”
A warm breeze ruffled Chief Peters’ unruly head of steel gray hair, and he raked his fingers through it in a combing motion. “You bet, Son. We really have to make time to do this more often. Damn case kept me so tied up, but it’s finally over.” He cut a bite-size portion of a pancake dripping with thick syrup with the side of his fork and raised it to his mouth.
“I say we quit talking about doing it and just do it, Pop and…” Mack stopped mid-sentence and pointed across the street. “Holy shit! Look at that.”
Chief Peters adjusted his glasses, and focused on a striking woman, her sexy body wrapped in a skintight fluorescent green spandex getup that almost looked painted on. She zoomed along effortlessly on inline skates, pulled by a shaggy white dog the size of a small horse. Her long jet-black hair fanned out behind her, lifted by the breeze.
“What the hell is that thing pulling her?” Mack said. “Wait a minute. Isn’t that Angelina LaPorte? Sure looks just like her.”
Bill chuckled. “That, my son, is a Great Pyrenees Mountain Dog. They’re related to St. Bernards, and I think you’re right about that being Angelina. I’m a big fan of hers. Did you see Murder by Design? She was great in it.” He laughed again. “One thing’s for sure. You’d never see a sight like that in places like Milwaukee or Oklahoma City. No wonder they call this LaLa Land.”
“Yeah, this is the land of wackos and strange sights. She’s mild, though. Now that I’m out on Metro patrol, I see some pretty weird stuff. Still, I have to admit she’s a winner with those skates, that body and that monster of a dog.”
His father nodded. “Yep, a body most women would give a fortune for, and probably do if they can afford the nips, tucks, and implants. I’ll bet between L.A. and Beverly Hills, we have the wealthiest plastic surgeons in the nation.”
“Yeah, that, too. Damn. I should have grabbed my cell phone and taken a video or stills. I could have been like a paparazzo and sold it to a tabloid for the big bucks.”
The police chief let out a loud guffaw. “Of course you couldn’t have used your own name, you know—after all, you are a police chief’s son.”
Mack took another sip of coffee, delighted to be able to spend Sunday morning with his father. It had been a long time since they’d been able to steal a few hours together to just yak about guy things. Reluctant to say goodbye, they lingered over the last remnants of breakfast. Bill had been tied up for months on the case of the Beverly Hills Strangler. The serial killer had terrorized the affluent community in his town, but on that perfect Sunday morning in early spring it was just the two of them sitting there having breakfast and trading stories.
Determined to follow in his father’s footsteps in law enforcement, Mack had been on the LAPD a little more than two years. Originally he thought he would become a lawyer, but in his third year of college he had announced his intent to drop out and take the exam for the L.A.PD. Bill tried to dissuade him from leaving school, but when he saw his son’s mind was made up, he suggested that Mack apply to Beverly Hills. Determined to rise in the ranks using his own talents—not his father’s name—Mack applied to the LAPD instead.
“So,” the Chief said as he leaned forward and rested his elbows on the polished gray concrete table, “when the verdict came back guilty at that scumbag’s trial, I felt like standing up and applauding. I don’t have to tell you that you never know which way it will go, but this time justice was done. My God, they found him guilty in less time than it takes to bar-b-que a steak. My city is safe again, at least from him. The strange thing is that guy just doesn’t look like a crazed serial killer. But then, looks aren’t everything.”
Mack grinned at his father, near hero worship lighting his face. “Don’t be so modest, Pop. Your insistence about keeping the chain of evidence clean played a big part in him being convicted. No O.J. fiasco for you. And that District Attorney. Wow, what a powerful case he presented. Frankly, I don’t think the jury could have ruled any other way in good conscience.”
They high-fived each other.
“More coffee, Chief?” The lively auburn-haired waitress sashayed her way to their table, holding a carafe aloft.
Bill put his hand over his cup. “Not for me, Betsy or I’ll float out of here. How about you, Son?”
Mack’s answer was wiped out by heavy metal music blasting from a BMW convertible as it cruised Beverly Drive with its top down. The vibrations were so intense, the front windows of the restaurant actually seemed to rattle.
Bill’s eyes flashed. “Damn those idiots. Do they think they’re the only people around? If I was still a street cop, I’d have ticketed them.”
Less than a heartbeat later, a black Hummer with blacked-out windows raced down the street. A window on the passenger side lowered, and a hail of bullets peppered the patio. It sped past before anyone could react or even catch a license plate number. Stunned diners watched in disbelief as the Beverly Hills Police Chief fell off his chair and lay on the ground in a pool of blood. Part of his head was missing. Betsy sprawled across him. She wasn’t going to be pouring any more coffee.
One of the bullets grazed Mack’s shoulder, but other than that he was unscathed.
Professional Reviews 4.0 out of 5 stars Would be exceptional with a little tweaking
I chose to listen to this book after receiving a free audio copy from the author through Librarything. All opinions in this review are my own and completely unbiased.
Mack Peters goes to Watson Falls to find a friend’s sister, Greta, who is a reporter. Greta went to look for her godson, Tony, and it turns out that she was undercover. She and Mack meet a couple of times while they both try to figure out what’s going on in Watson Falls. What they find is more shocking than they imagined.
The characters could have been more developed which would have made the story more suspenseful. There was a surprise at the end about two people who were interested in each other, but I had no clue. If they had shown interest in each other during the story, that would have made it more interesting.
The narrator was great. His timing and pace were perfect, and his voice is an enjoyable one to listen to.
I did like ending, and I would listen to Watson Falls again or read another Mack Peters book even though I think this could have been an outstanding book with some tweaking.
A Page Turner 5.0 Stars
Mack Peters survived the attack by a gunman that killed his police-chief father and an innocent waitress. Haunted for years by nightmares of those unsolved deaths, Mack went on a mission: bring those responsible to justice. In award-winning author Morgan St. James' latest thriller, she takes her readers along on Mack's quest that leads him to a place called Watson Falls. A page turner that won't disappoint. ~Dennis N. Griffin, Author
5.0 Stars Twists and Turns
Watson Falls by Morgan St. James has a very different vibe than most mystery novels out there. She picks a wide range of topics that is perfect for each reader's taste. The mystery around Greta the reporter who was missing was a very interesting storyline with a lot of twists and turns. ~Heidi-Lynn's Book Reviews
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