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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
9/28/2009 |
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Lovely write, Joan!
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| Reviewed by John Domino |
10/5/2008 |
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Well done!
To the world you might be ONE persn but to one person yu may
be the WORLD!
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| Reviewed by Prabhat Sarwar Lakhnavi |
6/1/2008 |
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| Very good poem |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
5/8/2008 |
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| Reminds me of my marriage feeling when I married my second hubby Oct 6 1990, Of course he passed on Aug 17 08, lonely for him now. When we married I carried one red rose and think the rose is simple and says a lot in your photo. Life is short, I surely must say, glimpses of ferris-wheels come only in the summer. Love this write ********** |
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
3/22/2008 |
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| Well said |
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| Reviewed by Andrew Shipley |
12/12/2007 |
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| A soft, lyrical piece that gracefully build in intensity, from "breath" to "whisper" to "fireworks" ... Nicely done. |
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| Reviewed by Ken Chartrand |
10/31/2007 |
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Hi Joan! I read your poem,"You Were". I found it to be one of the best poems on the topic of love. Great work ! Much beauty in the imagery. Please feel free to visit my site at www.freewebs.com/kendoo
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| Reviewed by Arthur Tugman |
7/3/2006 |
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Joan, I love this poem. You are a breath of fresh air.
Homeschool |
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| Reviewed by Karen Cino |
12/1/2005 |
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Awesome imagery. Such a beautiful poem.
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| Reviewed by Elaine Warely |
8/13/2004 |
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| great imagery |
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| Reviewed by Robert Sheridan |
3/27/2004 |
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Joan -
"Joan was quizical..." and then wrote this well-crafted poem - greatly enjoyed!
Robert |
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| Reviewed by Rodd Jokre |
11/4/2003 |
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| Wow... Excellent use of the language girl... Congrats... |
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| Reviewed by Jim Dunlap |
10/16/2003 |
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I've been writing sonnets for years, but I don't think this is a sonnet. It is a good poem, however, and well written, except
that I am put off by "anticipating at" which totally throws off that line. I had to go back and reread it because it stopped me
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| Reviewed by Janet Caldwell (author) |
10/13/2003 |
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Beautifully done. I also want to give a HUGE thank you for your kindness in the recording. TY.
JC xoxoxo |
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| Reviewed by Jim Howell |
9/29/2003 |
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| There was a soft vividness to your words. Very compelling & descriptive. |
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| Reviewed by Tyler Wiseman |
9/24/2003 |
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| This sounds more troubling than romantic to me, like romanticising a rape. Still, the second stanza is quite impressive, and the last lines use good psychologic metaphors. |
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
9/18/2003 |
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| Beautiful, it seems we change with each lovers touch and they get more intense bepending on our feeling for our lover. Bill Murray |
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| Reviewed by Marco Landi |
7/14/2003 |
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| well done...with few chosen words brava |
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| Reviewed by William Heffner |
7/3/2003 |
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Thanks for sharing your gift.
God Bless You and Your Loved Ones
Officer William Heffner |
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| Reviewed by E. Richardson |
6/27/2003 |
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| Absolutely beautiful...sensuous and classy. |
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| Reviewed by Adam Walsvik |
5/10/2003 |
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The word elegant came first to mind.
Yes. Elegant and simple. Uncluttered. You made your point extremely well.
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| Reviewed by Tom Hyland |
4/27/2003 |
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| Hi, Joan! EXCELLENT imagery! I especially liked the carnival part. |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
3/13/2002 |
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3-13-02
Lesson's Learned, Feeling's Yearned...
TRASK |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
3/13/2002 |
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| beautifully expressed |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
3/13/2002 |
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| Beautiful images |
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| Reviewed by Theresa Koch |
3/13/2002 |
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| What a beautiful sonnet! |
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