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Purgatory
by Jacquelynne Haycook → (All Poetry by Jacquelynne Haycook)
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Running through the corridor
Hands clawing for freedom
Screaming for forgiveness
Begging for release
The surface ripples above unseen fingertips
Stumbling over vines engulfing the floor
Scraping bare flesh
Winding fibrous threads around weary limbs
Struggling to escape
Fighting for air
Wrapped in a cocoon of helpless desperation
Needing redemption
Praying for salvation
Dragged into a blinding darkness
Eyes screaming for sight
A broken heart longing for peace
Left with naught but hands breaking through the surface
Ripping out what remains of humanity
A whisper silences the screams
Redemption and salvation demand a costly toll
Penances shall be paid by the immortal soul


Welcome to eternity

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 Reviews of "Purgatory"
Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on June 23, 2008
Always good to read your wonderful and descriptie works Kimberly !
* Wrapped in a cocoon of helpless desperation *....Oh Boy what a line !
Rock on !

Love
PP

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on June 21, 2008
Excellent choice of verbs - begging, stumbling, scraping, struggling, ripping out...give this poem real momentum.
John

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 21, 2008
Stunning both picture and words drive home with a huge impact. Well done.

Fee

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on June 21, 2008
Kimberly,

Love it. Sort of Stephen King-ish. I found your use of words very exquisite and well chosen. I sure hope the end is nowhere like your description. Peace, Love and Blessings, Paul.

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on June 21, 2008
Shades of Dante. I love it, Kimberly. Love the pace, the energy,
the writing, and of course the concept.

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on June 21, 2008
dark and foreboding, and a good write you have penned.

peace,
dan


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