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Deception On The Internet
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Deception On The Internet

I can tell you I am
The spirit of King Tutt
Just in this odd mans
Body I am stuck

I can tell you
My mother is Queen of the nile
I sometimes visit her for awhile
But I am just plain Ray
{ Not a Poet }
I'm not afraid to show it
I am just trying to be me
Humorous man is what you see

Although I hide
My hurt feeling in my poetry
The real Ray is still who you see
There is no one else I want to be
I'm just trying to be me

I do not try to live a lie
Though some others do
I don't know why
Please take me for who I am
Or on your way out
Please don't let the door slam

Live your life the best you can
For life passes fast, like sifting sand
Before you know it life will be gone
There are no lies in the great beyond

There you will sing a different song
You will pay for the things you have done wrong
Your lying days are now done
There is no place you can run

Just be yourself
Good friends will except you
For who you really are
If a liar you are made out to be
Your heart will sure be in misery
I know the internet is a wonderful tool
But still you shouldn't play people for fools

I hope you like who I am
Just a plain and simple man
Honest and true is how I stand
I don't know any other way
I'm just plain simple Ray

By
Ray Hamilton
{ The Great Canadian Buzzard }
Not a poet and I know it!
© Copyright 7 / 2008
All rights Reserved

____________________________

My father always said
You can't believe anything you hear
and only half what you see
Some things on this internet
would have brought him to his knees

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on July 13, 2009

Plain and simple is good! Especially if it's honest.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 12, 2009

Buddha must have been right when he said be nice to all living things because you never know what you will be in the next life. King Tut is now a Buzzard - Wow!

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

DITTO sweet man..you can say that again....just becareful OK..well done indeed..I have missed reading you...have a wonderful and safe day and this music whoaaaaaaaaaaaa...LOL MAKES YA WANA DO SOME KIND OFF DANCING..Giggles....sighhh...Hugss

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

That means...your promised stiptease is off? cannot man trust the Internet anymore?

Georg

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 11, 2009

Excellent poem Ray!Even Buzzards are deceived, on the internet! I've learned to keep my distance. My bio is my real name etc, so I'm especially leery of those who use many aliases, not just user names,but for everything.Anyway it's always best to beware!...ET

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Tell Me About It,i.e. I Got Ripped Counterfeit $3,000 Check But-So Do 1,200 + USA People Each Month...

GO FILE FBI: WWW.IC3.COM

File Crime Cyber Complaint,i.e.Lotsa Luck In Getting Your Hard Earned $$ Back...

Kool Write...

TRASK

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Not only that his knees have been bruised pretty good too. Enjoyed the work. Patrick. By the way you don't resemble you mother.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Excellent point made...e

Reviewed by Donna DeLong Matthews (Reader)

Well my sweet seems a bee is back around
the honey pot again. LOL

Your Dad had very good advice
and as a friend
let me give you some as well
YOU CANT FIX STUPID !!!!
Any one that can not see you as the awesome
sweet honest man and dear friend
that you are and can be proves that...

Ahhh just tell em
"BITE ME" !!!!

May not be very lady like but ya know what
to spread lies about others is neither lady
like nor a good Christian either....

Love you my Sweet Friend
Hugs
KKD

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Wise words... especially from a buzzard. Enjoyed.