A Prom Without You (poem) by Toris Okotie on AuthorsDen

A Prom Without You
by Toris Okotie → (All Poetry by Toris Okotie)

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Dedicated and written to the one who has captured my heart for internity; "Jitte Najomo". Thousands of miles of salt water and the endless dessert separate us but the thoughts of our love draw us even much closer.)

What is love without memories? The smooth sensation of the soul Devouring every thoughts of us Engraved in the faith of our heart. On this special day My heart melts with yours My thoughts, your thoughts to remember And our love in the burning flame that never ends The night is cold My heart desires to be with you To kiss the warmth of your lips And soak my tongue In the fountain of your speech To spa the smoothness of your neck With the kindness of my lips To open the door With key, which you kept secret from all but me To feel your intoxicating breathe Just an inch from my face That triggers my hormones, Blasting away my masculinity The night is still young Couples leaning on each other All I have to lean on Are your thoughts, your memories? With the last ink in my pen I engrave you with the words of my heart Not much written, but much to be said, In this heart, filled with your love. http://www.musecube.com/toris

Reviewed by Barry Weeder (Reader)

Reviewed on August 15, 2003

Ah, remembrance touched by the promise of times yet to come. Nice write. :)

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Romantic You_

Thank You for Your Kind Comments!!

TRASK

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on August 14, 2003

I applaud you for such an immaculate poem it was breathtaking

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on June 6, 2003

This was so beautiful, I love reading this so much this evening,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

This is absolutely beautiful!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Very sweet and sad indeed!....but wonderful memories.

May Lu $*_*$ a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Well, it can be sad to be left with memories - but as long as it is memories about love and caring and good times...Good write. S.

Reviewed by a- maryllis

"To kiss the warmth of your lips
And soak my tongue
In the fountain of your speech"
Damn, that's sexy!... beautiful write of love and longing Toris

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

beautiful, heartfelt write, toris; enjoyed reading~ love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :) thanks for your review! :)

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

The poet has delivered his "A Prom Without You", and I read it and enjoyed the reading.

==="A Prom Without You"=== will reach its audience for it is a true poem from the memory of the heart.

Long Healthy Life may enjoy the Author of "A Prom Without You".

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