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A Perfect Star
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On a night sky lay my lonely heart Searching through the pile of stars For my one true and only love But the sun came and washes them off Before I could find that one so perfect I now I lay on my waiting bed Looking up to the night sky Waiting again to find that star Whose glitter makes my heart well And its sparkly leaves me with lasting hope Tonight, I said to myself Will be the last night for my search For something tells me well I’ll find my perfect star

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Reviewed by William Heffner

Reviewed on December 24, 2003

The pursuit of perfection is within all of us, thanks for sharing the hope of victory.

God Bless You and Your Loved Ones

Officer William Heffner

Happy Holidays!

Reviewed by Sandra Corona

Reviewed on September 15, 2003

Some of the most 'perfect' stars are 'imperfect' but yet perfect to the eyes of those who love them.
Beautiful thoughts well woven.
:)Sandy

Reviewed by Afrika Abney

Reviewed on September 6, 2003

What a free flowing and inspirational piece, thanks for sharing this piece with us. One Love

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on September 4, 2003

Toris this is a beautiful piece, and may you have your wish!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on September 3, 2003

excellent poem...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on September 2, 2003

Wonderful, beautiful write!

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on September 2, 2003

Hi Toris,
Beautiful write...

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Floreann Cawley

Reviewed on September 2, 2003

a perfect poem my friend..Floreann *****

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on September 2, 2003

beautiful write, toris! my best to you! :D (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on September 2, 2003

Beautiful Toris! May it be as you wish!

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on September 2, 2003

Toris, this is beautiful. I know you will find your perfect star!! ~Z~

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