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Too Young To Love
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Too young am I, they said For love belongs to those in age But when the moon shield its light I gazed upon a star so lonely How long shall I continue to hid my face When the girl next door trough away the trash Form the box of my lonely room I painted her as an angel waiting to take me in Love they say comes by age But my teen years have no time to wait When I stir at her from a distance A tingle feeling overshadows my belly In love, I cannot say For they said love was too old for me

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Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on September 1, 2003

Splendid poem !!!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 24, 2003

powerful write ... i like the tonal quality and imagery...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 24, 2003

how sad yet beautiful in the telling....

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on August 24, 2003

Wonderful feeling!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Floreann Cawley

Reviewed on August 24, 2003

A brilliant write my friend..Floreann *****

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 24, 2003

wonderful write, toris; enjoyed! (((HUGS))) and love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on August 24, 2003

Great!!! Just great!!!

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on August 24, 2003

Toris, you are very wise for your years, beautiful poem! ~Z~

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on August 24, 2003

Oh Toris a beautiful poem
and i truly am inspired by the twist in the end...
Love is ageless yes.
PJ

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