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Raw Loving
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Lets dance in the pale of moonlight As love dribbles and worms down the curves Lets do all the free things we dream about Wakening all the new nerves. Dance with me with caresses Cuddle each cold waiting spot Kiss away tingles that cause a fear Nibble the freckles...each dot. Glide in this glen full of pleasures Kiss me deeper than ... then Cherish each move of a fancy Whenever you're ready say "when". Smile and dance with new pleasures Curve upon curve they move in Taking moments of passion Beginning again and again Float on the blue mist above me Grasping my hands to transend Gradually lower your spirit I'm open to all you can tend Beckon the evening's moment Flesh upon flesh we merge Fluids of passion erupting Moving upon curve after curve Shadows of dancing pleasures Silhouttes making the swoon Fitting the puzzle together Raw loving beneath the moon. Copyright 2006

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Reviewed by Pierre Ortega

Reviewed on August 14, 2006

Every walk, every dance, every embrace is a chance love will stay. You write my hope. and so well. Pierre.

Reviewed by Aubrey Hammack

Reviewed on August 12, 2006

I do think I like this.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 12, 2006

gettin' down to the raw passion, that's what this poem is. Absolutely incredible, Susan, passion expertly penned. Sigh!!!!!!!!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on August 12, 2006

"fitting the puzzle together" indeed speaks of a multi-faceted interaction between two as they prepare to meld as one.

Your writes, of late, Dixie-Bud betray a labyrinthine heart and soul laced with the jewels and treasures of love and communication, and also the striving and longing to find that place born in dreams that can happen between two who are willing.

This construct tittilates the senses with the honey and dew of romance. Great write. Love the image.

Blessings to you ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 12, 2006

Splendid loving!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 12, 2006

Dancing the night away - under the moonlight - marvelous.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 11, 2006

Now look what you did, made me yearn for what I can't have at the mo!;-)oo la la! Susan the sultry siren you are a passionate treasure;-)ET

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan

Reviewed on August 11, 2006

Well if the soul of a Southern Woman is exposed as per George (below), then I'm just proud to be one! LOL...You must have brainwashed all these guys Susan! They respond like Pavlov's dog to your sultry Southern way of passionate pen and HOT ink...but can I blame them? As if the weather weren't hot enough in Macon...
Great one Susan...
Love,
Taylor

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on August 11, 2006

a keeper.........:)

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on August 11, 2006

The soul of a southern woman is exposed in this delightful write.

Reviewed by ronald genise

Reviewed on August 11, 2006

Per ususal you words tingle the soul

Ron

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on August 11, 2006

Susan

Another winning combination from the Southern Belle of the Den...
The poem and the picture is very reminiscent of Rhett Butler and Scarlet O'Hara !
Great Stuff

In Friendship

Peter

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