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Raw Loving
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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Lets dance in the pale of moonlight
As love dribbles and worms down the curves
Lets do all the free things we dream about
Wakening all the new nerves.

Dance with me with caresses
Cuddle each cold waiting spot
Kiss away tingles that cause a fear
Nibble the freckles...each dot.

Glide in this glen full of pleasures
Kiss me deeper than ... then
Cherish each move of a fancy
Whenever you're ready say "when".

Smile and dance with new pleasures
Curve upon curve they move in
Taking moments of passion
Beginning again and again

Float on the blue mist above me
Grasping my hands to transend
Gradually lower your spirit
I'm open to all you can tend

Beckon the evening's moment
Flesh upon flesh we merge
Fluids of passion erupting
Moving upon curve after curve

Shadows of dancing pleasures
Silhouttes making the swoon
Fitting the puzzle together
Raw loving beneath the moon.

Copyright 2006

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 Reviews of "Raw Loving"
Reviewed by Pierre Ortega
Reviewed on August 14, 2006
Every walk, every dance, every embrace is a chance love will stay. You write my hope. and so well. Pierre.

Reviewed by Aubrey Hammack
Reviewed on August 12, 2006
I do think I like this.

Reviewed on August 12, 2006
gettin' down to the raw passion, that's what this poem is. Absolutely incredible, Susan, passion expertly penned. Sigh!!!!!!!!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on August 12, 2006
"fitting the puzzle together" indeed speaks of a multi-faceted interaction between two as they prepare to meld as one.

Your writes, of late, Dixie-Bud betray a labyrinthine heart and soul laced with the jewels and treasures of love and communication, and also the striving and longing to find that place born in dreams that can happen between two who are willing.

This construct tittilates the senses with the honey and dew of romance. Great write. Love the image.

Blessings to you ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 12, 2006
Splendid loving!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 12, 2006
Dancing the night away - under the moonlight - marvelous.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 11, 2006
Now look what you did, made me yearn for what I can't have at the mo!;-)oo la la! Susan the sultry siren you are a passionate treasure;-)ET

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
Reviewed on August 11, 2006
Well if the soul of a Southern Woman is exposed as per George (below), then I'm just proud to be one! LOL...You must have brainwashed all these guys Susan! They respond like Pavlov's dog to your sultry Southern way of passionate pen and HOT ink...but can I blame them? As if the weather weren't hot enough in Macon...
Great one Susan...
Love,
Taylor

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on August 11, 2006
a keeper.........:)

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 11, 2006
The soul of a southern woman is exposed in this delightful write.

Reviewed by ronald genise
Reviewed on August 11, 2006
Per ususal you words tingle the soul

Ron

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on August 11, 2006
Susan

Another winning combination from the Southern Belle of the Den...
The poem and the picture is very reminiscent of Rhett Butler and Scarlet O'Hara !
Great Stuff

In Friendship

Peter


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