While You Sleep (poem) by Susan K. de Vegter on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Pierre Ortega

Reviewed on September 5, 2006

So unique and creative, maybe hidden messages here....
Love Pierre.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on September 5, 2006

One of your best passion pieces. Except those hard things that burst--kept thinking of pimples poping.

;-)

Ron

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on September 4, 2006

Very nice pen you've posted. Enjoyed

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on September 4, 2006

And Pray That That You Awaken In (Not Your Mourning) Morning...

Unique N Different!

TRASK

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on September 4, 2006

You Romantic You!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on September 4, 2006

Susan with this one romantic piece
you have out done yourself
you left me at awe with this fantastic write

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on September 4, 2006

Very romantic in a very sizzling way ;-)

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on September 4, 2006

An outpouring of rubies from the heart of a lovely southern lady who understands and feels deeper than most.

Benisons ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on September 4, 2006

a warm, energized atmosphere to this sincere romantic poem ...

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)

Reviewed on September 4, 2006

Another masterpiece here Susan..Thank you for sharing..God your good at writing!!!

Eternal Love, Dove

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on September 4, 2006

AWESOME write, Susan! I enjoyed this!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Martin Hebert (Reader)

Reviewed on September 4, 2006

~~Susan~~SWEET..delightful poem~~

~~martin~~

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on September 4, 2006

Susan

Gotta laugh at Fee's amusing comments below..I reckon he is probably right..
Beautiful and passionate poetry

Love
Peter

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on September 4, 2006

Quite a passionate poem, Susan, and a most captivating graphic.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on September 4, 2006

Fortunate guy for if your love and passion before he went to sleep even half matched the love and passion as he slept then no wonder he sleeps the poor man would be sated and floating with the angels. Sweet write sensual and endearing in a wonderful blend. Love it sweetie.

Fee

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on September 3, 2006

Wow! This has it all Sis! I have to read it again, slower;-) I was a bit quick with the pace of your action...a feast for all the senses!
with some dark stuff to make it intriguing;-)

et

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on September 3, 2006

Yes, we often look at our love asleep and think about our feelings and relationships. Wonderful poem. Victor

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on September 3, 2006

I don't know why but it reminded me of Edgar Allen Poe's The Raven. Could be the meter.Love is in bloom tonight. Great romantic write.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on September 3, 2006

Of what I have read of your works Susan, this is definitly the best so far...ed