our mystical style of passion
is ten times hotter than we believe
flamboyant, flashy displays
await to be concieved
dazzling every goosebump
with no market for happenstance
provoking our passion issues
into provocative chance.
I like what Jude said, Susan. This make me think about those "spirit chances" and the reality enhanced by the fantasy of our own passion..."ten times hotter" steaming to be free...
Love,
Taylor
Oooo... scintillating and seductive, like finest Guipier lace that shimmers in its purity and brightness... And just you wait til those peacock tails open up as well! :)) Like bright eyes peeking above a Spanish fan is this... love the imagery, "dazzling every goosebump"... not for the chicken-livered!! :)) K xx
Tingling conjuring up images that these words create, I know readers and writers perceive each others work in different ways but as I read this I could feel your presence close by and the passion in your eyes burning bright. That is a charismic affect that is hard to obtain in written words.
Fee
Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on October 14, 2006
So glorious!!!!Thanks dearest Susan for this beautiful write!!
Excellent Pierre.
Chanti
Eileen
Love,
Taylor
Take care,
Sherry
excellent write
Love & Peace
William
Love Tinka
Fee
Love,
Dove
A clear and lucid exposition of the mystique and mystery of that
great intangible love..
Well penned piece
Bravo
Peter
Aberjhani
Regis
Susan