Just a Woman...Just a Man (poem) by Susan K. de Vegter on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 29, 2006

"Within myself a force that meets
An empty heart skips a beat
The rockets flying retro grade
Doubts that beckon, let them fade
Go for broke this time around"
You words blast off the page like the blaring rockets...
and magnify the feeling most often too hard to capture with words. Make me want to catch the feeling and just go with it...
Awesome graphic selection, Suze!
Love, Taylor

Reviewed by Pierre Ortega

Reviewed on October 29, 2006

This is so beautiful, if only we would share our true selves with each other love could be so wonderful. Keen and insightful write.
Pierre.

Reviewed by Randall Barfield

Reviewed on October 28, 2006

rhythm great i can hear soft drums in the background the play on "just a" is also really good cheers and happy u-know-what(tues.)

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on October 28, 2006

A 'go for it' summons, for sure,

Ron

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on October 28, 2006

Susan
This absolutely a beautiful poem
excellently expressed
Well Penned

love & Peace
William

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 28, 2006

Beautiful passion in poetry, Susan, exquisitely penned!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 28, 2006

Get it out...let it flow
Seek the summit... just let go

Wonderful!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 28, 2006

Great art and write to compliment it!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on October 27, 2006

You use imagery with ease, and describe the most mundane things in such high poetry, never debasing the art. Excellent art. Victor

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on October 27, 2006

"Like teardrops in a summer rain." This line is so much like love Belle. At times it is too hard to distinguish what is real and what is the other pretending to be love.

Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 27, 2006

Beautiful lush poetry Susan! The way of love
should be that simple two people in love just
doinbg what they can to make it work!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on October 27, 2006

Susan

Love to me has always been.... and always will be....." All or Nothing "..

Superb work of art..

And Gustav Klimt is one of my favorite artists..

Love and Light

Peter

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)

Reviewed on October 27, 2006

Stunning and beautiful muse Susan. I am speechless..

Love,
Dove

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on October 27, 2006

Go for broke this time around, They say that falling in love the second time around can be grand.