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The Phoenix
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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copyright 2006

What do you do when your hands are tied
When your heart is aching and your strength is tired
What can you do for a friend who needs to mend
Where to begin?

How do you uncage a magnificent bird
How can he eat, this is absurd
How do you rock him to sleep when he's cold
How to enfold?

Where do you run with him when you're through
Where does the Phoenix fly but to you
Where can you lull his weeping tears
Where down the years?

Hopeless and angry my tears well
Why has he fallen into this Hell
How can he live when he's not free to fly
Caught in this trap and not knowing why.

Love is the catalyst it unlocks the cage
Hopefully time will set the stage
Molting poor Phoenix how will you cope
Tethered and flightless ...caged with no hope.

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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 29, 2007
2006? The Phoenix will rise again.

Ronj

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 29, 2007
Stunning images and the topic is a classic idea with perfect delivery. VEry nice indeed Susan...good job.

Fee

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 28, 2007
Excellent write Susan.....I can relate to this friend of yours!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on July 28, 2007
Actually quite well the way it is. I think relationships can make us all feel just as a molting Phoenix. Lady J

Reviewed on July 28, 2007
Susan,

This one soars from the depths and lives again, like the Phoenix: beautiful.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on July 28, 2007
Thank you Susan For sharing your thoughts
Peace be with you

William
Peace & Love

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 28, 2007
Love is the catalyst it unlocks the cage
Hopefully time will set the stage

How true, on both counts, Susan.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on July 28, 2007
Excellent metaphors to what seems a very tragic all-too-human situation . . . When you've done YOUR best, then it is time of him to pick up the slack . . .

Reviewed on July 28, 2007
The flight of our most craved longings are chained achingly to the emotion studded wrist strap of our multi - caged lives.
Only the occasional breeze of a sigh ruffle their untested feathers. Meanwhile, waiting we wait.

'Tethered and flightless ...caged with no hope.'

Ah, but the last item to be found in Pandora's box is hope.

A poem to stimulate the most theatrical of our musings.

Regards
Dai





Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on July 28, 2007
Futures are created all the time out of unique past - Towards a unique sense of wisdom - love <*>Ted

Reviewed by rite
Reviewed on July 28, 2007
This life in this plane is merely a minute stint in our journey toward our Source and Destiny. The agony and grief that overwhelms us here and now will one time be nothing but a memory that helped shape to us into the ones we will be. There is not a trace of fatalism in or behind these words; there is just an undying faith in Truth and Justice, in the immaculate Light. Thank you for creating and sharing. Your words are understood, but worry you need not.

U

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 27, 2007
A remarkable poem with such compassionate thoughts woven with superb imagery! Wondrous Susan!


Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on July 27, 2007
No hope. That's realism for in mythology the phoenix rises again from its ashes. Beautiful thoughts. Victor

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on July 27, 2007
One day at a time my friend

Walt


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