Rain keeps coming from volumes of clouds
It trickles and cools down my passions that pound
Then just when I think I'm all calm and collected
The thunder resounds and I'm feeling neglected
I need the rain and the touch of my man
I crave the chill that warms with his hands
My tingles go up and then all back down
Then passions are wakened that push and then pound
Heavier the cadense merges with thunder
Then body's take refuge within one another
The fired up reality that comes and then grows
Keeps budding the nipples and curling my toes
The fever of flesh and the rosier tones
They prick each nerve with a sigh and a moan
The whispers that breath upon moistened skin
When floodgates are opened and love rushes in
Its the passion of storms that call upon lovers
Who roll with the thunder and move under covers
Its needing the pleasures that cadence with rain
It kisses our sorrow and loosens our pains
Its flirting with these provocative powers
The hot love of you and me and the showers
Its rhythms much faster then kisses all over
Its wet things that lick in places that hover
Its hugging and bonding in lightning's rebound
Its loving hot passions that don't touch the ground
When nature performs and passions do too
Its me needing this love from no one but you.
I too love the rain and find it especially sensual on a hot day when you can truly taste the drops on your tongue and splash again as we did when we were young. Lovely poem dear Susan.
hugs
Fee
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 28, 2007
Whoopie! You da best, no comparision . . . None . . . Nope . . . Nada . . . How does it feel to be on top of the game?
I think I've read this before, Susan, it is as beautiful now as then, just as passionate. Holy smoke. I'm singing in the rain, singing in the raaaaiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnn...well done! And need a cold chower to cool me off, suddenly got powerful warm in here. :)
Mary Angela Nangini's poems celebrate the richness of life and love. From the city to cottage-country and the roads in between, Nangini explores the changing seasons of her varied region. (This book will soon be reprinted in hard cover.)
This is a book of free verse poetry that addresses the seven main tests in life and offers some sensible solutions to passing those tests with minimal discomfort.
Ron
Is Atlanta getting any?
Blessings ...
Richard
Love Tinka
great poem ...
From a passionate heart;
What more can I say?
I don't know where to start!
Fantastic, heartfelt poetic story here lady.
Much love to you and your soulmate. God bless.
Paul
It kisses our sorrow and loosens our pains
What a marvelous poem! And what a marvelous dance scene that was in that picture.
Walt
This was out Wtirestanding Susan,
I will never view rain
the same ever again
Great write
Love & Peace
William
now, Your words speak to my soul, as allways.
Love, Pierre.
hugs
Fee
Now that's what I call SINGIN' IN THE RAIN! WOW! This is a scorcher; I needs to take a cold shower! LOL Very well penned; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Excellent sexually fun read!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~