There's a Door Yonder (poem) by Susan K. de Vegter on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 3, 2008

Pain is a gender bender.

Ron

Reviewed on May 1, 2008

Susan, this is sad & heart rendering...there's lots of good profound writing in this piece. You've said it so "great!"

Reviewed on May 1, 2008

The door is to go through (especially out). No lonely soul who is healthy should sit at home (or stand for that matter) waiting and sighing. Waiting for what? No, a lonely soul should strike back, get out and about, keep so busy there's not a second... I've seen it done.

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on April 30, 2008

There are lots of insights in this poem and taken literally they are all so true. Enjoyed this one, Nicely wrote a going strong. ***********

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 30, 2008

A very sad piece, Susan, and your last line says tons.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on April 30, 2008

Very thought provoking write here Sue. A lot of wisdom too and so very well said. God bless and have a wonderful day my friend.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on April 30, 2008

If only words could calm down aches...but, sometimes, the sole act of writing them down seems to dissipate them like snow under a hot summer sun.

Georg

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 29, 2008

You have such insight into the ups and downs of love and it makes your poetry very special,Susan!

ET

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on April 29, 2008

a deeply written poem--i enjoyed your use of language and words

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on April 29, 2008

I have enjoyed the reading of "There's a Door Yonder" for its poemization and subject dealt; its rhythm, wise ponderings and inspiration.

In respect and admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Carin Spirit

Reviewed on April 29, 2008

Feelings wrapped in words, this is so real. Thank you for sharing. Warmth and Love, Carin'

Reviewed by Pierre Ortega

Reviewed on April 29, 2008

This is one of your best, I can relate to and feel every line.
Wonderful heartfelt writing. The words you choose allways paint such
a vivid picture of your emotions.

Love,Pierre

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on April 29, 2008

Susan, you nailed this one as you always do when you set out to give us some old fashioned Georga common sense . . . That's why I luvs ya . . .

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on April 29, 2008

Very heartfelt expressions of sadness and pain and you are so right in your closing...the aches of the heart is gender blind.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by F William Broome

Reviewed on April 29, 2008

In every word and line you had my attention. As I read your lines, and your heartache through words, it gripped me completely. Having never known this kind of heartbreak, I can only imagine the pain of what is described. You took us all the way, and your writing skills continues to amaze.. We have each and all been there in some way.
Thank you for this. - Love, - Bill

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 29, 2008

Susan,

Sadness in these lines - powerfully penned and felt. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.