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You In Me...Me In You
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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This poem animates the complexities of spirits dwelling one into the other.

It is love's own puzzle.

Happy Saint Valentine's Day!

Susan*


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When you look at her and wonder

There are parts you can not see

Like the half of her that's missing

For the whole that's not to be

You see a woman shining

Feet planted in the ground

What you can't see is the sorrow

Or just where it once was found

Her appearance is astounding

For never would you guess

That this soul grieves no longer

And her insides aren't a mess

Nor a jumble...for this horseman

Came and took her soul

Left a gypsy spirit breathless

Took a part and left a whole

For his gift to her...his answer

His love was here and gone

Now the whole of her is seeking

The heart he took and won.

Let him go with freedom's spirit

For he left her with a glow

Took a heart that wasn't beating

Left a seed with which to sow

Many memories in the making

And a promise to return

To the part of her that's missing

For the soul still here that yearns

Today is worth the waiting

The future is a guess

As the soul of one so empty

Is a part of him... at best.

And the love of two good spirits

Beat forever a new whole

And the part that wasn't total

Is a story to be told.


Author ~ Susan K. Rowse

(c) copyright, 2004
(all rights reserved)


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 Reviews of "You In Me...Me In You"
Reviewed by Pierre Ortega
Reviewed on February 12, 2008
Love's puzzle only exists for so long, eventually we find the part of us that is missing.

Love You,
Pierre

Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
Reviewed on March 5, 2004
well done

Reviewed by Alain Gracio
Reviewed on February 22, 2004
How appropriate for Valentine's day You in Me...Me in you? its hard to separate when one half is you and the other is your soul. Its the metaphysical sensibilities that outcrop the ridges of this void. Yes indeed the nature of your feminity is the only category of thought that its included but the more I read the more I see the poetess soul, mind, and spirit. Your poems are like your fingerprints unique, detailed, and special. There are many layers to you and you have found the way to articulate your many beautiful experiences that have made you the women you are today, Very insightfull and precious what a beautiful women you are!
Cheers
Alain

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 16, 2004
A torchered tale by which others pale.

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
Reviewed on February 15, 2004
Surprising how much one can hide behind a mask. Very profound but beautiful write

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on February 14, 2004
Susan, this is one awesome poem. Truly a pleasure to read

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle
Reviewed on February 14, 2004
Someone said that a touch is forever. It scars you with love.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on February 14, 2004
Deeply moving, love the feel this gives, kinda mysticy

Reviewed on February 14, 2004
This was so well written, simply outstanding,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on February 14, 2004
Very Deep write Susan,
Well done.....

~PEACE

Peg

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 14, 2004
Deep emotive write Susan!!

Happy Valentines Day!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on February 14, 2004
Lovely, yearning expressed elegantly and poignantly.
Best regards,
Leland


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