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Broken Wing in 5-7-5
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You fell to earth hurt,
on the ground you lay wounded.
Your wing was broken.


I did not fall down,
my heart and soul are broken,
Broken from abuse.


Before I could fly,
did not even know a why,
seems like death had me.


My wing was broken,
together we will survive,
again we will fly.


G


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 Reviews of "Broken Wing in 5-7-5"
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on January 24, 2005
wonderfully encouraging
like the black n' white art
nice

Reviewed by Karen Chalfant (Reader)
Reviewed on January 23, 2005
Wonderful write with encouraging ending. Thank you for sharing!

Reviewed on January 23, 2005
uplifting and wisdom-filled write, as only you can do, g! very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 23, 2005
A great write Grady!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 23, 2005
Thanks for the uplifting Ku G!.
You do everything well;-)!

Love,Eileen

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on January 23, 2005
A most inspiring write, Grady, as yours usually are.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 23, 2005
A most uplifting poetic offering, Grady. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on January 23, 2005
And with this broken wing she flies and I do too. Grady I think that you also with this one.

Reviewed on January 23, 2005
Mend that broken wing and fly again...

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 23, 2005
Reminds me of a bird I looked after, as a kid, with broken wing. Kept it in storeroom till fixed. As I relaased it, the bloody thing, flew up hit itself on lawnmower, and died. How ungrateful is that?

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 23, 2005
A powerful and captivating Haiku Chain, Grady. Well Done!


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