Fine Tooth Comb (poem) by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 27, 2005

Just words of a nobody,
not really somebody.
I'm so very obscure,
but my heart is pure.
Some pick my words apart,
but I know my heart.

Excellent my friend....cheers...love n luck...I know ure heart is pure and it will be forever pure....BHUWAN!!!!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 27, 2005

"Some pick my words apart
But I know my heart"
Wise words. Great message, Grady. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Sandra Corona

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

Cool! You picked your words well :)! G.E. will you lend me your comb? (Sorry, couldn't resist :).) I applaud you!
Although my mother-in-law and husband spoke Spanish as their 'native' language BOTH insist 'I' (a straight 'A' student in high school and college) don't use correct English! I 'do' bend words in poetry and speech,but 'when I was child' is NOT saying 'I was TWICE a child' as they claim :)!
You have my permission to comb my work with a 'fine tooth comb' :)!
Keep in touch and take care.
:)Sandy

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on February 8, 2005

Well I don't feel you are a nobody either and yes people go over my words with a fine tooth comb. My husband has a uncle that does that. I agree that the naysayers will always find something to be negative about.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on February 8, 2005

Like it. Using a fine tooth comb.

Always leave one thinking..

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 8, 2005

grady you are NOT a nobody; you are SOMEBODY, and many people love what you have to say! i love your writings, and to heck with what the naysayers may think! i think you are terrific!

((((((((((((((((((((((HUGS))))))))))))))))))))))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :)

prayers to you too, buddy!

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Reviewed on February 8, 2005

Grady, you'll always be somebody to those who read your work. I like the rhyming pattern and the rhythm.

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on February 8, 2005

i hope no one is doing that to you grady...i enjoy your poetry

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on February 8, 2005

Love ya, G.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on February 8, 2005

No matter how obscure,
Poetry is the ultimate cure,
For all our ills,
They are better than pills...
Peace, Ed & Rufuz