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Same Old DoDo
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Slipping in the same old dodo,
hauled by the famed old choo choo.
Traveling the lame old track,
instead of going forward,
rolling back.
The choo choo nears the horizon,
nothing going on surprising.


Hopefully there's a defeat,
a change in the meat.
Maybe a new day to eat,
enjoy not messing up,
maybe do some dressing up,
to keep from stressing corrupt.


Days come and days go,
at times we don't know,
at times we do,
thinking wisely,
our way through,
trying hard not to,
step in the same old dodo.


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 Reviews of "Same Old DoDo"
Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on March 25, 2005
Your lament contains great advice...we have to take one day at a time and sometimes just getting up and dressing helps to defeat the dreariness.

Hugs to you!
Gina

Reviewed by Pier Tyler
Reviewed on March 25, 2005
I saw this the other day ~ Words of wisdom: Always look out for #1. Don't step in #2. My sentiments exactly about yoursplendid write, same 0, same 0.

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed
Reviewed on March 25, 2005
Social sure knows how to hurl it politically, romantically, socially and financially. We certainly need to keep the hip boots and elbow gloves handy, take a deep breath, hold it 'til we wade thru, in order to get past that same ol' dodo.

Thanks for slingin' these truths, Brotha Poet.
blessin's, and happy springtime Grady,
cynth'ya lewis reed

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 25, 2005
Wise words, Grady. Sometimes, the truth does hurt. Thank you. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on March 25, 2005
A good write, G. Makes me think of the proverb "As a dog returns to his vomit, so a fool returns to his folly." We can all use more wisdom in this area. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 25, 2005
Sounds familier to me!!

Love tinka

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on March 25, 2005
Wonderful write.

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on March 25, 2005
Yep sounds like me alright.

Reviewed on March 25, 2005
good message in this write, grady! and your writing is NOT doodoo, i think it is GREAT!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx, karen lynn. :(

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on March 25, 2005
If people would pick up their dodo then others wouldn't step in it, or we would have to create it for ourselves...there IS a message here...Ed

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on March 25, 2005
yeah grady...i'm on the lookout for new mistakes to make but to be sadly honest, all i've found are old worn out ones so far

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 25, 2005
Running around nowhere,

I think that's sadly probably what most of us do - most of the time.
And thanks for the kind words on my little surgery, Grady.


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