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Doing It
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Marvin Gay called it sexual healing, bless his soul.


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umm ahhhh umm aahhhhhhhhh
oh baby!
that feels real good.
Don't stop,
keep doing what you're doing.
I love the wayyyyyyyyyyyy,
you make me feelllllllll,
it gives me such a thrilllllllll!


Oh my Lorddddddddd,
excuse me God,
I didn't mean toooooooooo,
please forgive meeeeeeeeee!
I'm a little out of controlllllllll,
Oh chit baby!!!!!!!!!!!!!!,
You really know how tooooo


Wait a dam minute,
hold it now,
hold it,
I'm succumbing,
I mean cominggggggggg
Dammmmmm
ummmmmmmmmmmm
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh


Do it harder,
harder youuuuuuuuuu,
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh,
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh,
that's itttttttttttttttttttttttttttt!
Don't you dare quittttttttt!


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 Reviews of "Doing It"
Reviewed by Verne Washington (Reader)
Reviewed on January 28, 2007
This lacked any substance. Its more like a porn script. Sorry but I didn't find this amusing

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 27, 2007
hahahahaha.....now I know by reading this...what......how you do it...lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
Reviewed on January 26, 2007
Down to basics. Entertaining read. R

Reviewed by Laura Mayer (Reader)
Reviewed on January 26, 2007
Super awesome way toooo write. Wowee. Lol. This is fantastic!!!Hugs, Laura

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on January 26, 2007
Hmmm, and what's on your mind today? (wink) You sure as hell captured the moment, my friend!
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on January 26, 2007
Oh myyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy....sounds like you had funnnnnnnnn
WOOHOOOOOOOOOOO sweet man....Hugssssssssssssss

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on January 26, 2007
Wow!!! What a write! Sounds like you had quite the night too!!! Great write about a wonderful part of life.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)
Reviewed on January 26, 2007
I agree with Holly,WHERE"S the soundddddd effects,Goodddd jobbbbbb,
Michael

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on January 26, 2007
Dear *OnePoet, I only have one problem witht this poem....Where the hecks the sound effects? Lol, love Holly

Reviewed on January 26, 2007

"Doing It"
one, One, ONE~Great and entertaining.
Nothing can hold ya' down, guess you gotta keep on "Doing It" huh?
Heee, heee, heee wonderful write and sharing.

Best of care to you,
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm


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