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Don't Make Smoke
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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The atmosphere is better free and clear, with no smoke or fire near.


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Don't make smoke,
if you don't want fire.
Especially if love and peace
are your only desire.
When things get to burning,
others get to yearning
forget about learning.


Too much smoke,
will cause one to choke.
Choking in a flame
could get one burned in shame.
So goes the narrow escape
or in comes the big ape.


The ape beats its chest
some will forget what's best.
So goes the fear
and a loss of what's dear.
Hope will decline,
when smoke and fire
combine.


One


 


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 Reviews of "Don't Make Smoke"
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on March 25, 2007
Excellent write,sweet sweet man...Hugssssssss

Reviewed on March 20, 2007
YOur lungs will clutter
and you will mutter
The choices you made
Will bring your life downgrade

I love your humor, and I don't smoke! :)
I want to live an extra year! :)
Love the TV. program too, 31yrs and retired, with a CAdill.. hmmm...
Some are so lucky, they looked happy!
Thanks for Sharing Grady, my Sweet friend~
Warmly, WArrior Lady Sheeeoox

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on March 18, 2007
Excellent piece!

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on March 18, 2007
You always bring positive thoughts "ONE POET"
Peace,
Joselyn

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on March 18, 2007
good thought provoking write

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 18, 2007
Words of wisdom spoken!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on March 18, 2007

"Don't Make Smoke"

Oh I love this One and is oh so true!
You surely do know how to write the rhthmic meaningful poems.

All the best to you with love,
~Gwendolyn

Reviewed by Laura Mayer (Reader)
Reviewed on March 18, 2007
Great lesson One.
Hugs, Laura


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