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A-E-I-O-U
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Let he without sin cast the first vowel, right or wrong I'll never throw in the towel.


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Did I spell it right,
no I misspelled it slight?
I missed a vowel,
but I won't throw in the towel.
The towel stays on the rack,
then I get my words on track,
before the perfectionist attack.


They charge from all angles,
before the smoke clear,
I try to fix all my tangles.
Mistakes occur over and over,
where's my four leaf clover?
It's enough to make one paranoid,
yet writing I've enjoyed.


Some write with perfection,
I too head in that direction.
Sometimes I hit the target,
other times it's visit red market.
Even though I get stuck in the red,
I do not let it affect my head.


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 Reviews of "A-E-I-O-U"
Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
Reviewed on April 28, 2007
Cleverly written with a message we can relate to. R

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on April 24, 2007
Good for you, as for those that constantly point to the red...I will say "we have enough snobs as it is, give us a break!"
Right to the point, my friend, i like it.
Georg

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on April 23, 2007
good for you--i have certainly gone back and fixed plenty of errors myself-

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on April 23, 2007
Been there done that...no one is perfect! Well said my friend!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Sharon Jordan
Reviewed on April 23, 2007
Been there and done that too! Enjoyed!

~Sharon

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 23, 2007
Hehehehe...the little Ku-devil got you good huh???

Love Tinka


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